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Pure Hatred

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Pure Hatred

Postby Tido » Wed Dec 10, 2008 5:58 am

"Pure Hatred"
I'm the child you've forsaken
I can't believe
now I'll poven you mistaken...
the bastard child of your disease

All the wrong you've done
I can't believe
how much this reflects on me...
Your broken, I'm abandoned

Is it me that I see?
I can't believe
how much you looked like me...

Oh intoxicating drug
you set me free!!!
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Re: Pure Hatred

Postby shakespear » Sat Dec 13, 2008 9:45 am

hi friend :
i think this poem expresses sth inside ur heart.in addition i think u r suffering.
any way it`s good although it`s surrealistic.
gd luck friend.
our life is like a night mare
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