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BREAK HEART ON VALENTAIN

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BREAK HEART ON VALENTAIN

Postby sweets » Fri Feb 13, 2009 9:57 am

Tonight is mine
Everything is fine
Roses...candles ...loveing heart

Tonight i great night
Everything is fine

Now its' time
To meet you with a big smile

To whome i lie ???? to myself to you and why????
We do not meet for a long time
Iremmber last valentine
and all what i had was single rose ..single word
GOOD BYE
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Re: BREAK HEART ON VALENTAIN

Postby Vega » Wed Feb 18, 2009 1:41 pm

Nice, very nice.. :-)
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Re: BREAK HEART ON VALENTAIN

Postby sweets » Wed Feb 18, 2009 4:40 pm

THANK YOU ONCE nd twice {-: {-: {-:

because ur first one who comment on i'll publish new one soon and oneone reply on this except u

by the way how are u

cheeeeeeeeeeeeers
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Re: BREAK HEART ON VALENTAIN

Postby Vega » Wed Feb 18, 2009 4:57 pm

I'm fine, thank you.

I can see you've changed the avatar. :-) ...Nice, very nice one. :-)
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Re: BREAK HEART ON VALENTAIN

Postby Psixochka » Thu Feb 19, 2009 2:17 pm

It is sad and nice poem....

You have a nice new avatar, now I want to change mine with signature 8-)
Scio me nihil scire. (Latin)
I know, that I know nothing. (By Socrates)
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Re: BREAK HEART ON VALENTAIN

Postby sweets » Thu Feb 19, 2009 3:44 pm

Xkalibur
thanks for ur note about avatar

are still at army or back to ur life :roll:


Psixochka
thanks for ur comment but avatar is so gloomy why }:

see u
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Re: BREAK HEART ON VALENTAIN

Postby Psixochka » Sat Feb 21, 2009 4:38 am

Sweets, you are willcome 8-)
I don't know, but I like such pictures...
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Re: BREAK HEART ON VALENTAIN

Postby sweets » Sat Feb 21, 2009 1:47 pm

i like them too but not all the time
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