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Postby sweets » Fri Apr 24, 2009 4:42 pm

Close ur eyes
Do not think of time
And be with me
And have a dream


Imagine a life without lies ..
Without tears ..
Without pains or fair ..
No greedy here no wars there ..
No cries no speechless eyes..


Close ur eyes draw a smile or plant hope
No matter how no matter where
Do not say iam mad
Do not say iam alone
Use ur magic be charm
Iam sure you find some will here you


Step by step
With little hope little work
And share dream with around


Maybe not now... not today ..not tommorow...
But iam sure that one day this dream will be true


When you open ur eyes you will see that you are not alone in that dream
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Postby murugan » Fri Apr 24, 2009 7:57 pm

Dear Mohammed Lya(sweets)

Here you have a message from Kannan

that is

we have formed a trust in the name of B&S(Bhaskar& sweets) educational trust from baskar's birthday. Our friends only the members, among us we are putting money every month and we are ready to help poor students to study in our district.

bye
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Postby sweets » Sat Apr 25, 2009 4:45 pm

hi
first iam galde to see you
second you can not imagine how greatfull iam and happy to hear such news and ireally hope to help as much as you can

third tell kannan iam so sad of him cuz till now i did not recive any emails for him
i wish to hear you relpy soon
see you
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Postby MONEM » Sun Apr 26, 2009 10:55 am

Dear sweets what wonderful words you have written! It’s full of hope that we need to continue our lives.
Sometimes I feel that I’m alone even in my dreams! You know I like to do something everytime I close my eyes , I like to imagine my dreams come true .. I think this makes me happy but I still have to pray and make an action against my dream .
Hmmm maybe not today or tomorrow but it will be true in the day after tomorrow.

Thanks sweets you are great :-)
There is a man said some people see thing as they are and ask why??Idream thing that never were and ask why not!!
great minds have purposes other have wishes.
With all love
MONEM:)
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Postby sweets » Sun Apr 26, 2009 4:22 pm

hello dear momen
and thank you verey much for ur words at least giving that feelings for other that u can make differ in their lives
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Postby shakespear » Mon Apr 27, 2009 12:26 pm

hi
hola
u have fantastic imagination
u have everything ,every device of poetry and u took every illusion from the world so plz leave some thing to us
i`ve read this poem and i said what she spare to us???
congratulations
our life is like a night mare
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Postby sweets » Mon Apr 27, 2009 5:03 pm

well shaki u have a nice imagination too but u need to look to world not only in one view

do not worry maybe i'll not write for loooooooooooooooooong time

see u
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Postby sweets » Wed Apr 29, 2009 9:57 am

Well. murgan
Many things change my mind many peoples met before but still alive there some we met some we miss but their memories are alive in my heart
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Postby shakespear » Wed Apr 29, 2009 12:45 pm

hi
i meant by my msg that u gave every beautiful image by this ur poem and u did leave any lovely pic for us.
this expression means that we can`t write a piece or a poem as beautiful as urs.
u got it now???
plz don`t ask me to look at world with purple glasses koz i have my own black glasses and i`m satisfied with them.
thnx 4 advising me but i think its futility...........
i won`t say bye its only "c u" koz it holds more hope to meet
our life is like a night mare
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Postby sweets » Thu Apr 30, 2009 6:20 pm

goodevening shakespear

i know what u MEANS and i sure that i can not change ur mind or any body else it's just a try

we shall meeet not now not tommorow maybe one oday

cheeeeeeers
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