Ode to ephemeral
Because I love music
They offer me cd's,
That I won't listen
If I am alone.
Because I love music
They offer me mp3,
That I won't listen
In the street.
Because I love music
I got a violin,
That I won't train
For an employer.
Stock of mp3 ?
Stock of cd's ?
Stock of know-how ?
All this is stock !
And stocks make us worried :
Don't bring money,
Don't bring honey,
Bring only greed.
That's why I prefer
Shows than mp3
Cinema than dvd's.
Memory than photos.
Now you can better understand why I spend less time on FaceBook !
Shokin
Ode to ephemeral
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Ode to ephemeral
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Re: Ode to ephemeral
hellllllllllllllo
iagree with you that old things have different falvore than nowadays
things now are out of feelings as i think
so
That's why I prefer
Shows than mp3
Cinema than dvd's.
Memory than photos.
cu
iagree with you that old things have different falvore than nowadays
things now are out of feelings as i think
so
That's why I prefer
Shows than mp3
Cinema than dvd's.
Memory than photos.
cu
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Re: Ode to ephemeral
hi friend
i think u have good idea but the poem needs arrangement .
you blamed me for using chat language in my letter but u used abbreviation in your poem and this is not acceptable ad your point of view, don't agree with me???
gd luck and c u
i think u have good idea but the poem needs arrangement .
you blamed me for using chat language in my letter but u used abbreviation in your poem and this is not acceptable ad your point of view, don't agree with me???
gd luck and c u
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Re: Ode to ephemeral
Hi
Nice work, especially these words:
That's why I prefer
Shows than mp3
Cinema than dvd's.
Memory than photos.
I think that money nowadays is one of the most dreadfull evil...
Nice work, especially these words:
That's why I prefer
Shows than mp3
Cinema than dvd's.
Memory than photos.
I think that money nowadays is one of the most dreadfull evil...
Scio me nihil scire. (Latin)
I know, that I know nothing. (By Socrates)
I know, that I know nothing. (By Socrates)
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Re: Ode to ephemeral
Okay ! my poem is a bit sosolala ! = I didn't expect many congratulations.shakespear wrote:hi friend
i think u have good idea but the poem needs arrangement .
you blamed me for using chat language in my letter but u used abbreviation in your poem and this is not acceptable ad your point of view, don't agree with me???
gd luck and c u
Yes, but... I focused on a more dreadfull evil : the materialism when this one is bad for nature health :Psixochka wrote:I think that money nowadays is one of the most dreadfull evil...
What will we do with mp3 and discs ? Why do we get it ? stock, stock, stock holmes, Sherlock Holmes !!! what will nature do with all this ? Moreover all these things overcharged our unconsciousness : we are afraid to lose mp3, to lose discs. Where is the time when we accepted to lose things, to hear a song only once but deeply ? Where are the years when we were not telling ourselves "I have to know everything ! I must listen to Imagine of John Lennon because everybody tells me to listen to it !"
Shokin
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