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i won't ask you

Postby shakespear » Tue Jun 30, 2009 9:26 am

One of my dearest friends send me this poem :

Since you do not even think to ask about me
Since even forget to say hi
Since life's days come and go
Do not ask me why I am writing
such things cuz I do not know

I answered her this poem:

Trust me it is true, I tell you no fibs
You're in my heart.. among the ribs
Inside my mind, control my sensations
You chase me, like shadow, to all stations
I don’t need to ask about you, my love
Our life put us on the torture curve
You stream inside veins with my blood
Like a stormy tornado and violent flood
You paralyze my limbs, like a snake-sting
And control me, you break my wing
You're like me lost here and there
And always lament the time in anywhere
Days come, days go, they steal happy times
I won’t ask you why you wrote rhymes
That I know utterly you don't know
But I'll still love you, don't you think so?
our life is like a night mare
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Re: i won't ask you

Postby sweets » Tue Jun 30, 2009 7:05 pm

i send my comment to you
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Re: i won't ask you

Postby shakespear » Wed Jul 01, 2009 7:46 am

hola
i've just read ur comment but why u didn't issue it on the club to be read by all?
i'm asking u to do that
our life is like a night mare
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Re: i won't ask you

Postby sweets » Wed Jul 01, 2009 8:43 am

so you wanna to publish it ok
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Re: i won't ask you

Postby shakespear » Wed Jul 01, 2009 12:10 pm

thnx
and gd luck 4 all
our life is like a night mare
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Re: i won't ask you

Postby sweets » Sun Jul 05, 2009 10:18 am

SHAKI my freind

specail replyes are totally differnt than public one

are you with me in that
where you new comment {-;
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Re: i won't ask you

Postby shakespear » Mon Jul 06, 2009 9:36 am

hi
how r u? miss u
so what did u mean by this? plz explain!
of course u r right and i like ur point of view and i agree with u in advance but i like to know so plz explain
may i meet u on yahoo koz i miss u
c u and gd luck
our life is like a night mare
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Re: i won't ask you

Postby sweets » Mon Jul 06, 2009 1:52 pm

well
why shall i explain??????????

about meeeting let us leave it for chances

since today iam freeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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Re: i won't ask you

Postby shakespear » Tue Jul 07, 2009 6:07 am

ok
let it on chance although i know my chance is bad but its ok
my chance is black in every thing except in water melon its white
c u and gd luck
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Re: i won't ask you

Postby justme » Tue Jul 07, 2009 11:08 am

nice .....
Love is the master key that opens the gates of happiness.
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