sweets wrote: LIFE IS SHORT TO STAND AND THINK
shakespear wrote:hello every body
sorry sweet i was not here to commet ur poem .
i think ur poem is free verse but the words are beautiful and go deep inside souls.the words also touch the hearts and leave an effect on them. the style and idea is very good although i like to hear rhymed lines but its ok.
i wished i were the 1st to comment ur poem so forgive me
any hope to be ur..................
c u and gd luck
Xkalibur wrote:sweets wrote: LIFE IS SHORT TO STAND AND THINK
It should be: "Life is short, stand and think".
Some people are used to postpone to think about something they have on their minds for another "beautiful day". That day never comes.
Psixochka wrote:Hi, sweety
LIFE IS SHORT TO STAND AND THINK - these words are my favourite!!!
Sometimes I walk in the city and feel so happy, I enjoy just seeing trees, smell favour of sea... I like your poem
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