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CAN YOU !!!!!!!!!!

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Re: CAN YOU !!!!!!!!!!

Postby sweets » Mon Aug 03, 2009 2:09 pm

snice the heart says YES
but mind says NO

fix this if u can
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Re: CAN YOU !!!!!!!!!!

Postby shakespear » Mon Aug 03, 2009 4:20 pm

hello
whom will u follow heart or mind??
be careful before answer!
c u and goooooooooooooooooooood luck
our life is like a night mare
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Re: CAN YOU !!!!!!!!!!

Postby sweets » Mon Aug 03, 2009 5:16 pm

when mind get tired
when heart is bleeding
when eyes never stop searching
it'll TAKE long time to decide
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Re: CAN YOU !!!!!!!!!!

Postby farah » Tue Aug 04, 2009 10:31 am

hello
really u r skillful
i think u win
c u
we have to live our life freely
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Re: CAN YOU !!!!!!!!!!

Postby sweets » Mon Aug 17, 2009 6:27 pm

thanx farah for ur words but u did not tell me win WHAT {-:

thanx for ur comment
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Re: CAN YOU !!!!!!!!!!

Postby shakespear » Mon Aug 31, 2009 10:07 am

hello she wanna tell u that u won on me in this conversation don't u think so but i think u can't win on me
ok royal poetess
c u and good luck
our life is like a night mare
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Re: CAN YOU !!!!!!!!!!

Postby sweets » Mon Aug 31, 2009 1:46 pm

hi dear friend how are u and how is rammdan with u shall u come and have eftar with us {-:

i know that i can not win on u but days for u days for me {-;

i wrote new odde last night and call it THE EDGE as i remmber i think u'll like it snice it's sad one
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Re: CAN YOU !!!!!!!!!!

Postby farah » Tue Sep 01, 2009 11:40 am

hi
where is the poem and what are happening beteween you and shakespear??
you are lovers.
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Re: CAN YOU !!!!!!!!!!

Postby sweets » Sat Sep 05, 2009 8:15 pm

helllo farah
farah wrote:hi
where is the poem and what are happening beteween you and shakespear??
you are lovers.
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i think it's out of ur intersed whether we are or not

sorry for being too harsh with you
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Re: CAN YOU !!!!!!!!!!

Postby virgo » Sat Sep 12, 2009 9:26 am

actually it's a perfect idea about happiness

but i like that view
especially ur description with the optimistic look
thank u {-:
keep it up
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