my demographical(?) poem about some christmas decorations

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my demographical(?) poem about some christmas decorations

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No people in the West?


Christmas is comming
What I can see everywhere

Colourful lights and christmas trees on sale

Snowmen that dance around a Christmas fire
Reindeers that carry Christmas sleighs in northern direction

Many other animals like rabbits, hares and deers

Christmas stars, Christmas chains, Christmas sweets

But where are people in these western decorations?

Probably only Santa Clause is one human being worth mentionting
in this business

He brings gifts to…everyone

As good as usual

But why happy dancing snowmen around Christmas tree?
Where are kids?

There are 6 billion people in the world – they say

I can hardly believe it sometimes
Watching at western Christmas decorations
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goodmorning

i read ur odde once and twice i really like the discription
i agree with you that they miss the spirit of christmas things become more matiral than spritual no time to sitdown with family no time for anything
even us miss eid's spirit too
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Hi sweets... and everyone who cares...

Yes...probably you are right :(. Spirit of Christmas is dead somehow these days. But maybe not spirit - specially when you have white Christmas but real meaning sure :( But you know what I am thinking about at the moment? Can you guess? Yes - what kind of Easter poem I will write in some months here... rabits and hares again plus eggs and many green plants...what animal will be missing? A reindeer. Yes - a reindeer will be missing for sure. And snow :(

By the way - I made some corrections in my Christmas time poem.
Changes in red. I had only few moments to write it so some language errors.
And I forgot about some important Christmas innovations like Christmas cones.

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No people in the West?


Christmas is comming
What I can see everywhere

Colourful lights and christmas trees on sale
Some latest Christmas cones of different size and colour

Snowmen that dance around Christmas bonfires
Reindeers that carry Christmas sleighs in northern direction

Many other animals like rabbits, hares and deers

Christmas stars, Christmas chains, Christmas sweets

But where are people in these western decorations?

Probably only Santa Clause is one human being worth mentionting
in this business

He brings gifts to…everyone

As good as usual

But why happy dancing snowmen around Christmas tree?
Where are kids?

There are 6 billion people in the world – they say

I can hardly believe it sometimes
admiring wonderfull western Christmas decorations

LM
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LadyMacbeth wrote:No people in the West?


Christmas is comming
What I can see everywhere

Colourful lights and christmas trees on sale

Snowmen that dance around a Christmas fire
Reindeers that carry Christmas sleighs in northern direction

Many other animals like rabbits, hares and deers

Christmas stars, Christmas chains, Christmas sweets

But where are people in these western decorations?

Probably only Santa Clause is one human being worth mentionting
in this business

He brings gifts to…everyone

As good as usual

But why happy dancing snowmen around Christmas tree?
Where are kids?

There are 6 billion people in the world – they say

I can hardly believe it sometimes
Watching at western Christmas decorations
Wonderfull poem, LadyShakespare. Keep up the good work. :-) ;-)
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Thanks Xkalibur for your warm words. Though I am not sure my poem was specially good. A bit funny. Probably not the worst idea for poem but the rest far from ideal.
However I think it is good to write down your different thoughts in form of poem -
you can learn some English this way and give some message to human kind.
Maybe it is better than writing about Polish ghosts?
I don't know :roll:

Soon I am putting here my two next poems :
1. HUNGER
2. ETERNITY

Wish me a wonderful reception

LM

PS. Lady Sheakspeare had many kids, indeed. But Lady Macbeth was childless as far as I remember.
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ps1. one correction...

Lady Shakespeare

ps2. Mrs Shakespeare had 3 kids as I read.
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hello
as i think i have no kids
gd luck
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