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I won't ask you

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I won't ask you

Postby shakespear » Tue Jan 26, 2010 2:28 pm

Sweet /One of my dearest friends send me this poem:

Since you do not even think to ask about me
Since even forget to say hi
Since life's days come and go
Do not ask me why I am writing
Such things cuz I do not know
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I answered her with this poem:
I won't ask you
Trust me it is true, I tell you no fibs.
You're in my heart, among the ribs.
Inside my mind, control my sensations.
You chase me, like shadow, to all stations.
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I don't need to ask, about you, my love.
Our life put us, on the torture curve.
You stream inside veins with my blood.
Like a stormy tornado and violent flood.
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You paralyze my limbs, like a snake-sting.
And control me, you break my wing.
You're like me lost here and there.
And always lament the time in anywhere.
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Days come, days go, they steal happy times.
I won't ask you, why you wrote rhymes.
That I know utterly, you don't know.
But I'll still love you, don't you think so?
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Re: I won't ask you

Postby sweets » Wed Jan 27, 2010 7:52 pm

shaki my freind
iam happy that ur alive whatever u see whatever u suffered oneday it might be dreams (but u know as i know it will not happen it will stick in our mind )
about poem
thanx for replying
be in touch plz.
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Re: I won't ask you

Postby shakespear » Wed May 19, 2010 8:19 am

hello
i'll try but u know it's god's will
i'll try as possible as i could
c u
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Re: I won't ask you

Postby sweets » Mon May 31, 2010 4:17 pm

oh dear
u do not know ow happy iam when i read ur post it just give the felling ur ok
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Re: I won't ask you

Postby shakespear » Wed Aug 04, 2010 9:02 am

hello thnx 4 all u sent and i hope we'll meet much in the next days
cu sooooooooooooooooooooooooon and gd luck
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