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You’re my happiness

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You’re my happiness

Postby shakespear » Wed Aug 04, 2010 10:14 am

You’re my happiness

The moon, with the stars, has just danced merrily.
In the sky, for me, in the soft night.
The trees have swayed, the birds have sung happily.
The chance has smiled; I've loved at the first sight
------------------------------------ (1)
I'd loved you before even I saw you.
Our souls met, in that old, eternal world.
My heart beats with your name, and it'll still do.
If you expel me, in hell, I'll be hurled.
------------------------------------ (2)
I can see just you, and hear just your voice.
I say your name, in my waking and sleep.
My friends blamed me, but I have no choice.
Your love is my fate, carved in my far deep.
------------------------------------- (3)
You sent your aid Cupid, hold his arrow.
He darted my heart, let me bedridden.
Couldn't he convey me to you? Break his bow?
I need you, to remove my wound, my sin.
-------------------------------------- (4)
Take me in your arms, and cravingly tug!
Bring me closer to you, kiss me on lips!
Don’t leave me a second, please tightly hug!
Let me live sweet love, with your lovely nips!
--------------------------------------- (5)
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Re: You’re my happiness

Postby sweets » Wed Aug 04, 2010 6:27 pm

welome back my freind after this long time


what i'm sure that u didnot lose ur magical touch inspite of ur ubsent

it's full of hope that dreamy sweety hope

waiting more and more

cu
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Re: You’re my happiness

Postby shakespear » Wed Aug 04, 2010 8:05 pm

hello
u r so fast
thnx and u'll read more and more
c u
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Re: You’re my happiness

Postby farah » Thu Aug 05, 2010 5:41 pm

shakespear wrote:You’re my happiness

The moon, with the stars, has just danced merrily.
In the sky, for me, in the soft night.
The trees have swayed, the birds have sung happily.
The chance has smiled; I've loved at the first sight
------------------------------------ (1)
I'd loved you before even I saw you.
Our souls met, in that old, eternal world.
My heart beats with your name, and it'll still do.
If you expel me, in hell, I'll be hurled.
------------------------------------ (2)
I can see just you, and hear just your voice.
I say your name, in my waking and sleep.
My friends blamed me, but I have no choice.
Your love is my fate, carved in my far deep.
------------------------------------- (3)
You sent your aid Cupid, hold his arrow.
He darted my heart, let me bedridden.
Couldn't he convey me to you? Break his bow?
I need you, to remove my wound, my sin.
-------------------------------------- (4)
Take me in your arms, and cravingly tug!
Bring me closer to you, kiss me on lips!
Don’t leave me a second, please tightly hug!
Let me live sweet love, with your lovely nips!
--------------------------------------- (5)


i think you are great but to whom you wrote this poem?
i think she must be happy.
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Re: You’re my happiness

Postby sweets » Fri Aug 06, 2010 5:40 pm

farah wrote:
shakespear wrote:You’re my happiness

The moon, with the stars, has just danced merrily.
In the sky, for me, in the soft night.
The trees have swayed, the birds have sung happily.
The chance has smiled; I've loved at the first sight
------------------------------------ (1)
I'd loved you before even I saw you.
Our souls met, in that old, eternal world.
My heart beats with your name, and it'll still do.
If you expel me, in hell, I'll be hurled.
------------------------------------ (2)
I can see just you, and hear just your voice.
I say your name, in my waking and sleep.
My friends blamed me, but I have no choice.
Your love is my fate, carved in my far deep.
------------------------------------- (3)
You sent your aid Cupid, hold his arrow.
He darted my heart, let me bedridden.
Couldn't he convey me to you? Break his bow?
I need you, to remove my wound, my sin.
-------------------------------------- (4)
Take me in your arms, and cravingly tug!
Bring me closer to you, kiss me on lips!
Don’t leave me a second, please tightly hug!
Let me live sweet love, with your lovely nips!
--------------------------------------- (5)


i think you are great but to whom you wrote this poem?
i think she must be happy.


hi farah long time since u appear is it strange that u appear at same time that shakespear appear???????????????????????????????

now shakespear will u tell us to whome this poem is?
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Re: You’re my happiness

Postby Rose » Sat Aug 07, 2010 11:18 am

Hi shakespear
how are u?
nice poems you write...i liked them
and in the same time it is nice to meet a person from Iraq here
all my respect for all Iraq's people
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Re: You’re my happiness

Postby shakespear » Sun Aug 08, 2010 1:30 pm

hi
thnx 4 ur kind emotion
i'm very happy 2 be ur friend
c u
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Re: You’re my happiness

Postby shakespear » Sat Oct 16, 2010 5:45 pm

hello all
plz show me ur comment
c u
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Re: You’re my happiness

Postby manar » Tue Jan 04, 2011 8:42 pm

It is something that do in hearts what magic do in life,

of course i mean ur emotional words

best wishes for u
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Re: You’re my happiness

Postby Vega » Tue Jan 25, 2011 7:09 pm

I congratulate you! :-)
Your poem has been chosen as a winner of the Inspirational Post Of The Month Contest.


Best Regards,
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