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illusion

Postby shakespear » Thu Aug 12, 2010 5:20 pm

illusion

Your hair is the black night of the lovers
Your face is the shinning moon in that night
I sit silently , look at you for hours
Interested in you, in that sweet sight

Your eyes are green garden full of roses
Your rosy cheeks have two forbidden apples
Your lips are made of sweet red berries
Show me white pearls as they show smiles

You ‘re soft like the wings of a butterfly
You’re soft like the ray of the drowsy dawn
You’re soft like a blue sky in which I fly
You’re soft like a dew- drops of that fresh lawn

You are my eyes by which I see your charm
You’re my ears by which I hear a nice song
You’re my pleasure from God to forget your harm
You’re my heart beating fast, forgive your wrong

No food, no drink, no breath, but I need you
I can’t live without you, you are my life
I need you closely, who is like me, who?
You’ve hurt me, in my heart you’ve stabbed your knife

You’ve stolen my heart and let me alone
My queen, Have your slave! But give him a dose
Day and night, I always see you and moan
I’m afraid I lose my lovely red rose

I wrote this poem but you inspired me to write this poem so you gave me this favor. you remembered that these words had been mentioned in our chat, please accept my kisses habeeby.
good luck
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Re: illusion

Postby sweets » Thu Aug 12, 2010 7:36 pm

to my best freind

this time u wrote a charming lovely poem
and be sure u'll not that red rose

ur so senstive

this is
my frist comment wait for my deep omment

cu and well done
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Re: illusion

Postby RoseRed » Thu Aug 12, 2010 8:36 pm

Nice poem i liked so much u are great!
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Re: illusion

Postby sweets » Fri Aug 13, 2010 10:08 am

hola

well i read it agine but i did not find anything to talk about it's perfect and complete full of lovely senses and great emontions ur so great and glade to be freind to u
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Re: illusion

Postby shakespear » Fri Aug 13, 2010 12:02 pm

thnx for all friends who comment on my poem and i'm very happy to have friends like u
good luck and i pray god help u and me.
thnx thnx thnx thnx
c u
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Re: illusion

Postby farah » Sat Sep 04, 2010 7:57 pm

Hi
I didnot remember these words so who u meant habeeby?
:-( :-( :-(
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Re: illusion

Postby shakespear » Mon Sep 06, 2010 10:49 am

hello
its not 4u
c u later
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Re: illusion

Postby farah » Tue Sep 28, 2010 6:55 pm

Hello
Nice to be your friend
Best wishes :lol: :lol: :lol:
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Re: illusion

Postby shakespear » Thu Sep 30, 2010 5:13 pm

its my pleasure
thnx
have nice moments and gd lk
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Re: illusion

Postby farah » Wed Oct 13, 2010 3:51 pm

Hello
Please can you write a poem about me?
I send messege to you please read it and answer me.
I will wait to read the answer.
Bye
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