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Skies of fantasy

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Skies of fantasy

Postby shakespear » Tue Jan 26, 2010 2:09 pm

2-10-09 Friday-------1:00
Skies of fantasy (سماوات الخيال)
I don't even know who I am, and where to.
You made me, forget my self, you're my balm.
It's a disaster, if I forget you.
You're my rest, my serenity, my calm.
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Even sleeping in a grave, the human doesn't die.
As long as there is someone, remembers him.
Beat me, hurt me, kill me, I won't say why.
But don't banish me away, at your whim.
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Sooner or later, all the masks will fall.
And you'll know that you've loved the enemies.
You're beautiful, but you're just a doll.
When I see you, I become 'n bad stymies.
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From that miserable distant place, I've come.
All the good men, one after one, fell dead.
I swim in skies of fantasy, I'm numb.
The mercy-angel had patted on my head.
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Don't forget me, or our past sweet moments.
Just remember, let me live in your mind.
Don't erase our memories, we live in scents.
Ah my lovely half, like you I can't find.
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Re: Skies of fantasy

Postby sweets » Wed Jan 27, 2010 8:01 pm

in spite of date u wrote this one u remind me with one of my oddes(flowen coulds) but i did not publish it since u were not here

i guess u face alot and only u had was dreams to eacape through

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Re: Skies of fantasy

Postby shakespear » Wed May 19, 2010 8:16 am

thnx 4 evey things
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Re: Skies of fantasy

Postby farah » Tue Aug 10, 2010 8:20 am

:-D :-D :-D FANTASTIC :-D :-D :-D
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Re: Skies of fantasy

Postby shakespear » Sun Aug 15, 2010 7:20 pm

hello
thnx 4 ur comment
hope 2 try writings
c u
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Re: Skies of fantasy

Postby farah » Sat Sep 04, 2010 5:23 am

Hi
please send me your email
BYE {-: {-: {-:
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Re: Skies of fantasy

Postby shakespear » Mon Sep 06, 2010 11:01 am

hello
ok but not here koz its not allowed
c u later
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Re: Skies of fantasy

Postby shakespear » Sat Oct 16, 2010 5:48 pm

hello
farah i sent it
sorry if i was late
c u
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Re: Skies of fantasy

Postby shakespear » Sun Sep 11, 2011 3:21 am

hi
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Re: Skies of fantasy

Postby Lara » Sun Sep 11, 2011 4:08 am

shakespear wrote:It's a disaster, if I forget you.

It's hard to say i cant forget u, but then u dont realize when it happens, so it's not as hard as we have thouhgt... hmm, think about it
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