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Ode from inside a jail

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby farah » Sat Sep 04, 2010 5:14 am

Hi
I didn't see this poem on facebook yet. Please tell me when you put it in facebook.
:mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen:
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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby shakespear » Mon Sep 06, 2010 11:08 am

hello
i do'nt know when he'll put it on fb
u can ask him
his name is msaabneh
c u
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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby fanuun » Tue Sep 14, 2010 9:37 am

NICE FLOW. YOU ARE REALLY GOOD.
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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby shakespear » Wed Sep 15, 2010 8:10 pm

thanks fanuun
i'd like to hear comment and i wish u pick up mistakes from my poem that i think u will give me expensive gift.
thnx again and accept my regards
c u and gd lk
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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby farah » Sun Sep 19, 2010 6:27 pm

hi
I miss you all
Any new poem?
see you
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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby shakespear » Sun Sep 19, 2010 7:33 pm

hello
really no new poems yet
may be in next few days, i don't know ...
poet needs inspiration
thnx 4 ur comment
c u
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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby farah » Tue Sep 28, 2010 6:49 pm

Hi
I shall send you my picture to give you inspiration please write a poem on me
Thanks
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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby shakespear » Thu Sep 30, 2010 5:17 pm

inspiration isn't given by photos only it's given by chatting and feelings
now u know that? i hope u got it
any way i'll be glad to get ur photo, it's my pleasure to c ur face and figure....
c u
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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby farah » Wed Oct 13, 2010 3:49 pm

Hello
Please can you write a poem about me?
I send messege to you please read it and answer me.
I will wait to read the answer.
Bye
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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby Aimee » Thu Oct 14, 2010 5:46 am

Really a heart touching poem friend. Noticing the word jail i first hesitated to read this poem. but now i feel happy that I read this. Superb!!!!!
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