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when we love!

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when we love!

Postby manar » Wed Jan 05, 2011 9:01 am

when we are in love,
we are happy,
we are sweet,
we are calm,
and we are strong.


It is too easy to fall in love,

it is too easy to feel love,
it is too easy to give love,
it is too easy to share love,
it is too easy to give sacrifice for the sake of love,
it is too difficult to find the one who deserve your love.

Being in love is a nice dream that we do not want to wake up from,
it is that emotion which makes you feel as if you are a king,
who has a wonderful kingdom to rule,
and a charming garden to lay in,
that is your beloved heart,soul and lap.
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Re: when we love!

Postby manar » Wed Jan 05, 2011 12:38 pm

Hello every body,
it is my first attempt in writing creative writing,
so ,please write ur comment
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Re: when we love!

Postby Vega » Thu Jan 06, 2011 6:52 pm

I liked it. Thank you! You must be in love with someone, right? :-)
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Re: when we love!

Postby manar » Thu Jan 06, 2011 10:32 pm

hello vega,
first ,thank u for ur nice comment, {-:
with regard to ur quoistion,i say:
mmmmmmmmmmmm , may be yes,may be no,
the only certain thing is that he isnot the suitable one ;-)
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Re: when we love!

Postby sweets » Mon Jan 17, 2011 7:37 am

hi manar and nice odd but i don't agree with u about (It is too easy to fall in love) in same time i agree about (it is too difficult to find the one who deserve your love.) coz it so hard to find true and honst love nowadays

but i's so sure like what vega said ur or were in love dear
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Re: when we love!

Postby manar » Mon Jan 17, 2011 8:51 am

hello sweets,
thanks a lot for ur comment,
i beliv that if we meet the suitable one in the suitable time ,it becomes too easy to feel love.
sometimes we misanderstand people and we make ideals from them in the time they r not and after falling in love with them we discover the bitter truth.
Either being in love or not i not sure ,he is not the suitable one and that is enough to stop thinking of him anymore.
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Re: when we love!

Postby sweets » Tue Jan 18, 2011 1:03 pm

well everyone have personal ideas about love
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Re: when we love!

Postby manar » Tue Jan 18, 2011 3:33 pm

hi sweets,
can u summarise ur personal view about love?
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Re: when we love!

Postby sweets » Wed Jan 19, 2011 9:59 am

tell me urs first
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Re: when we love!

Postby manar » Wed Jan 19, 2011 12:25 pm

hi sweets,
in fact i asked u to summarise ur view about love,in the time i believe it is a very difficult test
to summarise such a lofty feeling,but if i try.......
mmm...Sacrifice with ones desires for the sake of the beloved , even if these desires is being
in touch with them!
i wish u get it,
now tell me urs .
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