when we are in love,
we are happy,
we are sweet,
we are calm,
and we are strong.
It is too easy to fall in love,
it is too easy to feel love,
it is too easy to give love,
it is too easy to share love,
it is too easy to give sacrifice for the sake of love,
it is too difficult to find the one who deserve your love.
Being in love is a nice dream that we do not want to wake up from,
it is that emotion which makes you feel as if you are a king,
who has a wonderful kingdom to rule,
and a charming garden to lay in,
that is your beloved heart,soul and lap.
when we love!
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Re: when we love!
Hello every body,
it is my first attempt in writing creative writing,
so ,please write ur comment
it is my first attempt in writing creative writing,
so ,please write ur comment
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I liked it. Thank you! You must be in love with someone, right?
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hello vega,
first ,thank u for ur nice comment,
with regard to ur quoistion,i say:
mmmmmmmmmmmm , may be yes,may be no,
the only certain thing is that he isnot the suitable one
first ,thank u for ur nice comment,
with regard to ur quoistion,i say:
mmmmmmmmmmmm , may be yes,may be no,
the only certain thing is that he isnot the suitable one
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hi manar and nice odd but i don't agree with u about (It is too easy to fall in love) in same time i agree about (it is too difficult to find the one who deserve your love.) coz it so hard to find true and honst love nowadays
but i's so sure like what vega said ur or were in love dear
but i's so sure like what vega said ur or were in love dear
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hello sweets,
thanks a lot for ur comment,
i beliv that if we meet the suitable one in the suitable time ,it becomes too easy to feel love.
sometimes we misanderstand people and we make ideals from them in the time they r not and after falling in love with them we discover the bitter truth.
Either being in love or not i not sure ,he is not the suitable one and that is enough to stop thinking of him anymore.
thanks a lot for ur comment,
i beliv that if we meet the suitable one in the suitable time ,it becomes too easy to feel love.
sometimes we misanderstand people and we make ideals from them in the time they r not and after falling in love with them we discover the bitter truth.
Either being in love or not i not sure ,he is not the suitable one and that is enough to stop thinking of him anymore.
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Re: when we love!
well everyone have personal ideas about love
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hi sweets,
can u summarise ur personal view about love?
can u summarise ur personal view about love?
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tell me urs first
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hi sweets,
in fact i asked u to summarise ur view about love,in the time i believe it is a very difficult test
to summarise such a lofty feeling,but if i try.......
mmm...Sacrifice with ones desires for the sake of the beloved , even if these desires is being
in touch with them!
i wish u get it,
now tell me urs .
in fact i asked u to summarise ur view about love,in the time i believe it is a very difficult test
to summarise such a lofty feeling,but if i try.......
mmm...Sacrifice with ones desires for the sake of the beloved , even if these desires is being
in touch with them!
i wish u get it,
now tell me urs .
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for me love means respect before anything else
love means sharing someone moments wether good o bad
love means supporting and giving without regret
this is what i'm looking for manar
love means sharing someone moments wether good o bad
love means supporting and giving without regret
this is what i'm looking for manar
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Re: when we love!
i wish u find what u look for very soon,
how nice it is to find the trustful person who shares u his soul.
how nice it is to find the trustful person who shares u his soul.
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It can tell about love that who truly loves someone, never asks for anything and always gives everything.
How describe what oneself feel when fall in love?. It's very difficult. The best is experience.
First it's a storm of fire. When years go by it's a deep sea in calm and finally two persons in love become in only one think, only one will, only one soul.
How describe what oneself feel when fall in love?. It's very difficult. The best is experience.
First it's a storm of fire. When years go by it's a deep sea in calm and finally two persons in love become in only one think, only one will, only one soul.
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hello every 1,and thanks ArnauEstanyol for the nice words u told us about ur view about love
to live as one will and one soul,how romantic it is.
to live as one will and one soul,how romantic it is.
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hello
its not our choice to love bad one or good one.... i think its our heart's choice koz sometimes we love one whom not deserve our love but we love him or her... our heart follows the beloved even if he or she bad and severe
its my point of view
u have lovely topic manal
have good luck u and our great friend sweet
c u all soon
its not our choice to love bad one or good one.... i think its our heart's choice koz sometimes we love one whom not deserve our love but we love him or her... our heart follows the beloved even if he or she bad and severe
its my point of view
u have lovely topic manal
have good luck u and our great friend sweet
c u all soon
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Re: when we love!
u r right shakespear i agree with u,mmmmmmmmm u r a poet even in prose