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WE KNOW
We know
I know that you know
ask me I won't say no
we're friends, don't you think so?
if u ignore me, where I’ll then go?
I know and you know
my back became like a bow
o dear! hundreds oh and oh
your beauty made me undergo
I know that you know
hurry up an' don't say wait !
we always are slow and late !
we’ll lost our intimate date
cheat me if this is my fate ,
check me and tell me the rate !
cheat me but don't say wait !
cheat me , you.. I won't hate,
that I know you are my fate
then accept me in any state !
I know that you know
ask me I won't say no
we're friends, don't you think so?
if u ignore me, where I’ll then go?
I know and you know
my back became like a bow
o dear! hundreds oh and oh
your beauty made me undergo
I know that you know
hurry up an' don't say wait !
we always are slow and late !
we’ll lost our intimate date
cheat me if this is my fate ,
check me and tell me the rate !
cheat me but don't say wait !
cheat me , you.. I won't hate,
that I know you are my fate
then accept me in any state !
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sorry for all readers...
i want to correct a word at the line 12" we'll lost..."
the correct is " we'll lose"
thnx for all readers
i want to correct a word at the line 12" we'll lost..."
the correct is " we'll lose"
thnx for all readers
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hi shakespear and welcome back,
in fact the most important feature that attract me in urpoems is the simpilicity in attrance with the strength in meaning,how great u r friend,keep it up![Very Happy :-D](./images/smilies/icon_biggrin.gif)
in fact the most important feature that attract me in urpoems is the simpilicity in attrance with the strength in meaning,how great u r friend,keep it up
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thnx friend u always present here to encourage me and i thank god i know u
thnx again and have lovely moments
thnx again and have lovely moments
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my dear friend
u always inspire me to write but i'm sure that my writes will not be like yours
this time ur odd reminds me with that game "i know "
so I know that you know nothing stay at all and who knows what this heart carries for u ?
u always inspire me to write but i'm sure that my writes will not be like yours
this time ur odd reminds me with that game "i know "
so I know that you know nothing stay at all and who knows what this heart carries for u ?
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hi
i meant by this odd " i know that u know i'm in love with u "
the 2nd line means" ask u whatever u like i won't say no and i'll obey"
then if u refused me so when will i go koz i have none but u and no place,
i know and u know that my back became like bow koz i spent my life waiting for u to accept me, and because the hurt of ur love i said oh and oh and oh....and lots of oh that i suffer from ur bueaty...
this is the 1st stanza and i wish u can express the 2nd stanza
good luck
i meant by this odd " i know that u know i'm in love with u "
the 2nd line means" ask u whatever u like i won't say no and i'll obey"
then if u refused me so when will i go koz i have none but u and no place,
i know and u know that my back became like bow koz i spent my life waiting for u to accept me, and because the hurt of ur love i said oh and oh and oh....and lots of oh that i suffer from ur bueaty...
this is the 1st stanza and i wish u can express the 2nd stanza
good luck
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ok according to my stand for this stanza let me say ................
that lover wanna love he wanna to feel that he belongs to some one ...he wanna feel with stability he wanaa she to cheat him if she can but not leaving him .
for she i guees she is asking him to wait coz she is afraid from manythings and she refuses to till him why
this is my comment
that lover wanna love he wanna to feel that he belongs to some one ...he wanna feel with stability he wanaa she to cheat him if she can but not leaving him .
for she i guees she is asking him to wait coz she is afraid from manythings and she refuses to till him why
this is my comment
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hellooooooooo
u r not only sweet but in addition u r clever and i said u r perfect
that is right he feels that he belongs just to her not to another one that koz of his passion, his love, his ador,....
he asked her not to say wait koz they were late in living togather, don't say wait koz she was afraid of ppl may they see him and his lover togather, the life will end soon and they r late
thnx
u r not only sweet but in addition u r clever and i said u r perfect
that is right he feels that he belongs just to her not to another one that koz of his passion, his love, his ador,....
he asked her not to say wait koz they were late in living togather, don't say wait koz she was afraid of ppl may they see him and his lover togather, the life will end soon and they r late
thnx
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hi
(she was afraid of ppl may they see him and his lover togather, the life will end soon and they r late)
i guess ur right that her biggest fear
(she was afraid of ppl may they see him and his lover togather, the life will end soon and they r late)
i guess ur right that her biggest fear
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hello
really u r so frank and we all r afraid and care 4 that koz we r arab and u know what does that mean...
anyway i hinted at that but u explained it frankly
thnx , u shorten the way...
really u r so frank and we all r afraid and care 4 that koz we r arab and u know what does that mean...
anyway i hinted at that but u explained it frankly
thnx , u shorten the way...
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so if traditions and open-mind thinking are in quarrle what he soultaion?
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ok its so hard matter.... a quarrel between the educated and the back... and i think in our time , the back will win koz most ppl like money and not like science.
think of it plz
think of it plz
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i just feel lost in all this situation i do not know what should i do satisfy myself or family and society ?
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hmmm
ok u have to harmonize among them so u can satisty all of them
i know u understand me so u don't need and explanation.
c u
ok u have to harmonize among them so u can satisty all of them
i know u understand me so u don't need and explanation.
c u
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Hello
Harmonize .... I think this word refers to a kind of hypocrisy....Hypocrisy means u wanna satisfy all quarreling persons either they were right or wrong, my point of view is that we can't agree with those who are not right
thanks
Harmonize .... I think this word refers to a kind of hypocrisy....Hypocrisy means u wanna satisfy all quarreling persons either they were right or wrong, my point of view is that we can't agree with those who are not right
thanks
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hello
its not a kind of hypocrisy ....its a kind of wisdom to satisfy all persons and even ur enemies
but i respect ur point of view
thnx
its not a kind of hypocrisy ....its a kind of wisdom to satisfy all persons and even ur enemies
but i respect ur point of view
thnx
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Re: WE KNOW
well i have nothing to comment about..............
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hi sweet
wt's ur opinion about hypocracy?
plz i wanna know ur idea about it
c u
wt's ur opinion about hypocracy?
plz i wanna know ur idea about it
c u
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Hello
I think it is good poem
good lukk
I think it is good poem
good lukk
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hello farah
we all wait 4 u to give us something , plz send us a poem or story or anything
thnx and have lovely times
we all wait 4 u to give us something , plz send us a poem or story or anything
thnx and have lovely times
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u know the old say (it's impossible to satisfy all people wishes ) so how long you play on hypocracy rope you'll fall oneday . you might get benfits from hypocacy but in sametime you are loseing yourself respectshakespear wrote:hi sweet
wt's ur opinion about hypocracy?
plz i wanna know ur idea about it
c u
this is my opinion
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hi all,
i gree with u sweets,but donnot u think that sometimes we may be obliged to do so?
i mean ,is there NOWADAYS any person free from this bad disposition?
i gree with u sweets,but donnot u think that sometimes we may be obliged to do so?
i mean ,is there NOWADAYS any person free from this bad disposition?
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that is very good sweet and i agree with u really i have another say" satisfying people is ungetable purpose....sweets wrote:u know the old say (it's impossible to satisfy all people wishes ) so how long you play on hypocracy rope you'll fall oneday . you might get benfits from hypocacy but in sametime you are loseing yourself respect
this is my opinion
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and about ur say manal i think the loyal person won't be obliged to do so koz hypocracy is lie and the rope of lie is very short, in addition there r many loyal people are free from this bad habit....manal wrote:i gree with u sweets,but donnot u think that sometimes we may be obliged to do so?
i mean ,is there NOWADAYS any person free from this bad disposition?
thnx
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[quote="shakespear?[/quote]
and about ur say manal i think the loyal person won't be obliged to do so koz hypocracy is lie and the rope of lie is very short, in addition there r many loyal people are free from this bad habit....
thnx
best regards[/quote]
u r right shakespear,
but if we look inside ourselves more accuracly,we may find some blemishes here or there.it is the natural disposition of all human kinds,otherwise there would be no difference between angles and human beings!
what loyal people do is to struggle to cultivate our selves to be good.
thanx
and about ur say manal i think the loyal person won't be obliged to do so koz hypocracy is lie and the rope of lie is very short, in addition there r many loyal people are free from this bad habit....
thnx
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u r right shakespear,
but if we look inside ourselves more accuracly,we may find some blemishes here or there.it is the natural disposition of all human kinds,otherwise there would be no difference between angles and human beings!
what loyal people do is to struggle to cultivate our selves to be good.
thanx
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hi manal
u said"is there NOWADAYS any person free from this bad disposition?"
my answer is no one is free of that of course
u said"is there NOWADAYS any person free from this bad disposition?"
my answer is no one is free of that of course
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hi sweets,
thnx,and
best regards...
thnx,and
best regards...
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really good
go on.
go on.
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i don't agree with u and i think there r lots of ppl have loyalty and free from this bad disposition...sweets wrote:hi manal
u said"is there NOWADAYS any person free from this bad disposition?"
my answer is no one is free of that of course
really i respect ur say :
this is the only fact in the worldsweets wrote:you might get benfits from hypocacy but in sametime you are loseing yourself respect
thnx
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ur welocome my freind and ur free in ur thoughtsshakespear wrote:i don't agree with u and i think there r lots of ppl have loyalty and free from this bad disposition...sweets wrote:hi manal
u said"is there NOWADAYS any person free from this bad disposition?"
my answer is no one is free of that of course
really i respect ur say :this is the only fact in the worldsweets wrote:you might get benfits from hypocacy but in sametime you are loseing yourself respect
thnx
monaji
why you do not share us this disscution ??????????????????
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hellooooooooooooosweets wrote:ur welocome my freind and ur free in ur thoughts
this is ur say
it was ur opinion and now u r no longer adopting it, really u bewildered me.....sweets wrote:so how long you play on hypocracy rope you'll fall oneday . you might get benfits from hypocacy but in sametime you are loseing yourself respect
this is my opinion
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I confused you ??????? how I did that?
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[quote="sweets"]so how long you play on hypocracy rope you'll fall oneday . you might get benfits from hypocacy but in sametime you are loseing yourself respect
excuse me:
shakespeare,do u think that we may have another opinion other than this??????
ofcourse sweets is completely right in what she said,the idea is not if it is good or bad because it is a determined issue that hypocracy is nothing but losing once respect!!!!!!!!
here i would like to clarify my view that nowadays or may be even in the past days it is rarely ,if not impossible ,to find someone who is completely free from such a bad tember with respect to the Natural Human Disposition!
thanx and sorry for disturbance
good luck.
excuse me:
shakespeare,do u think that we may have another opinion other than this??????
ofcourse sweets is completely right in what she said,the idea is not if it is good or bad because it is a determined issue that hypocracy is nothing but losing once respect!!!!!!!!
here i would like to clarify my view that nowadays or may be even in the past days it is rarely ,if not impossible ,to find someone who is completely free from such a bad tember with respect to the Natural Human Disposition!
thanx and sorry for disturbance
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hello
thnx 4 this explanation and u didn't disturb me....
so u and sweet wanna explain the facts and u r not adopting the idea , so that's well and great.
thanks all and accept my respect
thnx 4 this explanation and u didn't disturb me....
so u and sweet wanna explain the facts and u r not adopting the idea , so that's well and great.
thanks all and accept my respect
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ok,i have talked about my self and given it the right to replace sweets,but if sweets has another opinion ,of course ,she is welcome.
thanx all.
thanx all.
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hello
thnx manal and i hope u r ok u and all the ppl here
have lovely times and sweet moments
c u soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
thnx manal and i hope u r ok u and all the ppl here
have lovely times and sweet moments
c u soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
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welcome back , dear shakespeare,,,i am happy to reread from u..thanx
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hi
thnx 4 ur replying and u r welcome every time
c u friend
thnx 4 ur replying and u r welcome every time
c u friend
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HELLO
ALL IS KNOW HERE AND ITS DIFFICULT POETRY I THINK SO
ALL IS KNOW HERE AND ITS DIFFICULT POETRY I THINK SO
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hi
its not difficult just read it once and twice and plz concentrate on it , read among lines u'll fine wt u can't understand
have nice moments
its not difficult just read it once and twice and plz concentrate on it , read among lines u'll fine wt u can't understand
have nice moments
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I didn't quite understand this part.shakespear wrote:.... don't say wait koz she was afraid of ppl may they see him and his lover togather, the life will end soon and they r late
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(I was just following the thread of replies thinking I could get deeper meaning of the poem...)
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hi
ok listen
she asked him to wait koz she was afraid from people , she asked him not to be close to her and he answered her that they are late in getting the happiness, they r late in living happiness moments and the life will end soon , they'll reach to the life-fall
thanks 4 ur comments
ok listen
she asked him to wait koz she was afraid from people , she asked him not to be close to her and he answered her that they are late in getting the happiness, they r late in living happiness moments and the life will end soon , they'll reach to the life-fall
thanks 4 ur comments
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hi friends
hope happy times 4 u all
hope happy times 4 u all
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shakespear wrote:We know
I know that you know
ask me I won't say no
we're friends, don't you think so?
if u ignore me, where I’ll then go?
I know and you know
my back became like a bow
o dear! hundreds oh and oh
your beauty made me undergo
I know that you know
hurry up an' don't say wait !
we always are slow and late !
we’ll lose our intimate date
cheat me if this is my fate ,
check me and tell me the rate !
cheat me but don't say wait !
cheat me , you.. I won't hate,
that I know you are my fate
then accept me in any state !
after correction
our life is like a night mare