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poems will flow...

Postby shakespear » Tue Feb 22, 2011 7:39 pm

Itried to write a poem but i can't , i know that i have something to write about but i can't now ...y??????? i don't know y ? may be its koz of not holding the pen. poems inside our souls are like volvano, u can't excite it unless magma and melted things inside it boil, in that time the volcano excite and its magma will flow , our soul is like the volcano and the poems are like this magma so we have not to oblige our selves to write a poem.
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Re: poems will flow...

Postby sweets » Wed Feb 23, 2011 10:27 am

hi
well in my opninon i think that poems are like mirrors of ourselves and snice we canot write that's means we are not see ourselves well and this is the catastophy in my opinoin...

for me i gusee that i stopped writing koz i can not see myself well anymore maybe when i remove shades around my i'll write a new shiny poem

by the way nice avatar shaki. is it u ??????????
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Postby shakespear » Wed Feb 23, 2011 5:36 pm

hello sweet
nice 2 know u r ok....
i think ur analysis is lovely and i like it. may be u r right but really i didn't know a word in ur comment"catastophy" i didn't know the meaning of it and not found itin dictionary.
nice 2 meet u here and i hope all ur affairs r ok.
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Postby manal » Wed Feb 23, 2011 6:32 pm

hi friends,
ok shakespeare,in my opinion creative writing has no place or time,it depends in the situations,events and this life we r in,it starts with an idea that we donot know when or where it can be perfectly grown and comes out,the same like the child inside his mother,it needs 9monthes to be completed :lol:
donot worry friend , as u just get the idea and it will be greatly shown to the world in its suitable time ,like all of ur works.
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Postby sweets » Wed Feb 23, 2011 8:37 pm

shakespear wrote:hello sweet
nice 2 know u r ok....
i think ur analysis is lovely and i like it. may be u r right but really i didn't know a word in ur comment"catastophy" i didn't know the meaning of it and not found itin dictionary.
nice 2 meet u here and i hope all ur affairs r ok.
have nice moments


hi
sorry i wrote it in wrong way it's (catastrophe)
for me let's say i', better than before {-;
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Postby shakespear » Fri Feb 25, 2011 8:22 am

hi all
thnx manal 4 this comment ...i think u have here great simile 4 the poem although there is small difference.
i think poem is like rain or like wind or dream we can't control it....
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Postby manal » Fri Feb 25, 2011 8:47 am

hi ,
it can also be like the small seed,little by little it changes to an amazing rose.
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Postby shakespear » Sat Feb 26, 2011 3:22 pm

helloooooooooooooooo
woooooooooooooooooow u have really lovely simile and i think " amazing roses" like ur avatar
thnx
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Postby manal » Sat Feb 26, 2011 6:35 pm

thank u,
now tell me,when can i read ur new poem? :lol:
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Postby shakespear » Sun Feb 27, 2011 7:29 am

manal wrote:now tell me,when can i read ur new poem?

hello
i think the rain didn't fall yet so the seeds didn't grow ...
u know my meaning and sweet said i need inspiration to write and it didn't come yet
really i start a new poem but as all my poems i feel it is so hard koz i'm in the beginning of it..
c u
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