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LIFE FALL

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Re: LIFE FALL

Postby manal » Mon May 09, 2011 6:17 am

yes,,we need it,,not only in our countries but even within the limitation of our thoughts....
good luck..
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Re: LIFE FALL

Postby sweets » Tue May 10, 2011 5:25 am

right needs mouths & actions too

what happens in our countries is an reaction of years of unjustice ,,,courrpution &fake promises

if they were not moving these days so when ???????????????????????
it's good to see ppl finally took a real action in their lifes
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Re: LIFE FALL

Postby shakespear » Tue May 10, 2011 7:31 am

hello
woooooooooooow
yes u r right
actions in addition to mouths and wt happened in our countries as u said, is a reaction agianst unjustice and severeness from governments towards the poor citizens and people.i agree with u friends and u've said the truth and we need to change our bad thoughts , ideas and every things about the reign in our countries. rulers must know how to treat ppl , how to give them freedom. freedom isnot just words , its actions and practice. why we can b like foreign countries like france, britain, usa, and others , we, the arabs, were the most applying justice in the world , we teach world justice and now we r at the back of procession.
ok thnx
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Re: LIFE FALL

Postby manal » Tue May 10, 2011 2:50 pm

hi friends,,
yes,it is exactly as u said...okey..with people full of awarness like u,,,i believe our countries will do better in the coming years...good luck
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Re: LIFE FALL

Postby shakespear » Wed May 11, 2011 7:25 am

hello
thnx of ur soft words and i agree with that our ppl have ot be aware of all that, rulers stole and still steal peopl's fortune , rulers kill our son's and brothers and parents in cold blood
people now r awaking up and will not stop
goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood luck
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Re: LIFE FALL

Postby farah » Sat May 21, 2011 9:57 pm

HELLO SHAKESPEAR
HOW ARE YOU?
YOU SPEAK THE TRUTH AND WE HAVE TO KNOW THE RIGHT THINGS AND FOLLOW AND KNOW THE WRONG THINGS AND AVOID
I WANTED JUST TO SHOW MY IDEA
THANKX A LOT
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Re: LIFE FALL

Postby shakespear » Tue Jun 14, 2011 7:59 am

hello
that's r8 and i think u understand it
have nice moments
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Re: LIFE FALL

Postby farah » Wed Aug 10, 2011 7:48 am

HI FRIENDS
I WISH YOU HAVE YOUR WISHES
BYE
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Re: LIFE FALL

Postby shakespear » Thu Aug 11, 2011 1:38 am

u2 thnx friend
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Re: LIFE FALL

Postby shakespear » Tue Oct 18, 2011 5:11 am

shakespear wrote:Life-fall

The orange sun’s fallen behind that line
Behind distant horizon, losing its shine
The darkness will reign soon, stretch its black limbs
Control the world, deploy fear on the rims
The fire will turn faint, a cold wind will blow
We approach the life-fall, our steps are slow
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I close my eyes, stretch my hands in air
Try to imagine your eyes, your lips, your hair
Dream touching your face, your features and cheeks
Smell your warm breath and fly to the high peaks
Hug your vision and find I hug just space
Then grief pervades my soul, my heart, my face
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Your wide eyes seem so clear in the moonlight
Seem as silver pools… is it my first sight?
Did I see them before, as calm as now
To your eyes’ beauty we all must bow
Spring grants the world new buds, flowers and scent
Why does it last short as if it is lent?
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All sweet things in the nature don’t last long
We are like scattered words in a swan-song
A dead’s got nothing but soil in his fist
So sing the sad song before death-harvest
A sea-nymph will play her eternal tune
And in night, I draw your face on the moon
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Oh sweet days last long I’ll meet my mistress
Tell the spring not to end and try one kiss
You won’t leave, you won’t know any season
And you’ll love the moon, the silent horizon
Embrace the trees and birds, sing in whisper
“Let’s live our joy, it’s our last nice supper”
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i like this poem
its one of my lovable poems
c u all
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