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Insanity

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Insanity

Postby Dylis » Thu May 12, 2011 7:50 am

Can you see my tears, can you see them overflowing?
Can you hear my screaming, can you hear it and stay sane?
Can you make me feel better, when I lose my reason to live?
Can you stand there and watch me dying, without saying a word?

I hate your glance, it makes me feel insecure
Watch me standing in the air, watch me disappearing
It tooks me a second or two... But I still can feel you
Because we can't stay separated, we can't stay disengaged

Wait for me, wait for my shadow
Don't go without last goodbye, please don't
Don't escape, don't run away
You will just lose your way to the safe place...

Can you see my crippled face, can you see it bleeding?
Can you hear my sob, can you hear the sound of my fading?
Can you tell me some meaningless words, just to confirm that you're still alive?
Can you stand on the rain, stop breathing, and come with me...
I'm not really sure what I want, what you can,
what we will lose when this comes to an end.

I hate your voice, it makes me melt and thaw
Hear my sick laugh, hear my insanity
I know you'll become insane too.. But I still can feel you
We can't stay separated, we can't stay disengaged

Wait for me, wait for my shadow
Don't go without last goodbye, I beg you
Don't escape, don't run away!
You will lose your heart, you will die slowly.

Wait for your existence to be healed...
Wait for the darkness to withdraw...
Wait for me, I know you will
Wait for me in that thing called hell.
I'm not really sure what I want, what you can;
what will we lose when this comes to an end?


I know it's almost like horror. I was just in a weird mood when I wrote this. :-)
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Re: Insanity

Postby sweets » Sun May 15, 2011 6:26 am

helllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllo

do u know i felt in this way manytimes in my life that life is meaningless is nothing waiting 4 nothings only 4 shades

u really have a good tanlent so keep on even if what you write is horror beacuse oneday you'll write with hope and sense of happiness
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Re: Insanity

Postby Dylis » Tue May 17, 2011 3:39 pm

hello, and thank you a lot!
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Re: Insanity

Postby manal » Fri Jul 08, 2011 3:16 pm

meaninglessness..................
it is a case that many if not all of us feel from time to time.............we want the thing that we do not know...we just want!!!!!!!!!!
thanx a lot,,,,really i liked it.
best wishes
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