It's time
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It's time
It's time to say bye
To lies
To old memories
It's time to say bye for old days for sad nights
This is the time to leave all that behind
Tomorrow it' will be no more of that no lies no fakes
Goodbye my love it's time to pass
Do not think just let me pass
Because I do not care no more
I fed up waiting &wasting time
days go like shade of old dreams
without taste without color without melodies
what ever you do I'll not wait
it's your time to set &wait
so it's time to say Goodbye
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Re: It's time
It's just the time to announce a winner of our small humble contest "Inspirational Post of the Month". Congratulations, Sweets!
However, I'm not quite sure about what exactly you tried to convey through:
Nevertheless, don't say Goodbye to us dear writers. I hope to see your new poems for the next month!
Regards,
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However, I'm not quite sure about what exactly you tried to convey through:
It seems a little bit suicidal..If I am mistaken, sorry!sweets wrote:Goodbye my love it's time to pass
Do not think just let me pass
Because I do not care no more..
Nevertheless, don't say Goodbye to us dear writers. I hope to see your new poems for the next month!
Regards,
mod Vega
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Re: It's time
how nice it is to take the suitable decision in the correct time!
hello sweets,i m happy that u finally find the topic that inspires u,go on
hello sweets,i m happy that u finally find the topic that inspires u,go on
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congratulations my friend
really u deserve it
its a good poem koz it is full of senses and soft words
i don't want to spoil ur happiness but i found one mistake that u used 2 negatives in one sentence and i think this made weakness in the line:
forgive me plz koz i can't prevent my self with these things
thnx and go ahead
congratulations again
really u deserve it
its a good poem koz it is full of senses and soft words
i don't want to spoil ur happiness but i found one mistake that u used 2 negatives in one sentence and i think this made weakness in the line:
i think u can say: Because I care no more ...or ...Because I do not care any moresweets wrote:Because I do not care no more
forgive me plz koz i can't prevent my self with these things
thnx and go ahead
congratulations again
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wooooooooooooooow i did not imagen to be the winner for this month man thanx to all
vega
"It seems a little bit suicidal..If I am mistaken, sorry"
well i have suicidal mood nowadays so ur not in mistake
manal
"how nice it is to take the suitable decision in the correct time!
hello sweets,i m happy that u finally find the topic that inspires u,go "
thanx for ur words and no more to say about &i hope to find new inspiration sooooon
shakespear
"don't want to spoil ur happiness but i found one mistake that u used 2 negatives in one sentence and i think this made weakness in the line:"
no need to say sorry it's my fault at first beside u know i do not care much about grammer moreover when i start writing i canot stop to correct !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
thanx to all of u
vega
"It seems a little bit suicidal..If I am mistaken, sorry"
well i have suicidal mood nowadays so ur not in mistake
manal
"how nice it is to take the suitable decision in the correct time!
hello sweets,i m happy that u finally find the topic that inspires u,go "
thanx for ur words and no more to say about &i hope to find new inspiration sooooon
shakespear
"don't want to spoil ur happiness but i found one mistake that u used 2 negatives in one sentence and i think this made weakness in the line:"
no need to say sorry it's my fault at first beside u know i do not care much about grammer moreover when i start writing i canot stop to correct !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
thanx to all of u
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u r moooooooooooooooooooooost welcome my friend
i am so much happy for ur happiness,go ahead
i am so much happy for ur happiness,go ahead
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it's wonderful to hear that dear freind
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Dear Sweets
This is what we expect from you
we are the passing clouds may be it has hide the moon(Sweets) for sometime
but it cant keep within it
but the sky(Baskar) has the moon(sweets) every seconds, microseconds, mintues, anhour, everyday, and every moment.
Both sky and moon can't seperate from each other
we are so glad lookafter then your poem
Because you are starting to hate us,
thats what we expect from you
that's enough for us. because you are ready to start to find a new and bright life.
Go ahead. Baskar will not coming back for you and for us.
Don't look back, Go ahead
Our blessings with you
Muruganji
One more thing,
Mr. Kannan (hard Person) is return back from cairo last month during his visit for business he suffered a lot.
He is highly ediot to inform you at that time where he was?
This is what we expect from you
we are the passing clouds may be it has hide the moon(Sweets) for sometime
but it cant keep within it
but the sky(Baskar) has the moon(sweets) every seconds, microseconds, mintues, anhour, everyday, and every moment.
Both sky and moon can't seperate from each other
we are so glad lookafter then your poem
Because you are starting to hate us,
thats what we expect from you
that's enough for us. because you are ready to start to find a new and bright life.
Go ahead. Baskar will not coming back for you and for us.
Don't look back, Go ahead
Our blessings with you
Muruganji
One more thing,
Mr. Kannan (hard Person) is return back from cairo last month during his visit for business he suffered a lot.
He is highly ediot to inform you at that time where he was?
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hi murgan really u suprise me &i'm so happy 4 that
u know i think u have a good sense to write why u do not try and share us?????????
i'll not go back trust me this time but i can't hate you wht ever happened
send my regards to Kannan i knew wht e suffere in Cario due to disturbance anywa thanx to Allah that he back safely to his family
keep coming here plz. and send messages a lot
u know i think u have a good sense to write why u do not try and share us?????????
i'll not go back trust me this time but i can't hate you wht ever happened
send my regards to Kannan i knew wht e suffere in Cario due to disturbance anywa thanx to Allah that he back safely to his family
keep coming here plz. and send messages a lot
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Dear Sweets
Actually I don't have sense to write
In his(Baskar) odds described you as you are the full moon
That's what I told the fact
otherwise i won't attract you from my side
You wrote, I would not go back, trust me
why did you say like that
don't ruin your life, First job,then be support your family financially, and finally get bright future. can you understand?
You promise me first and then I think to continue to communicate or not with you
murugan
Actually I don't have sense to write
In his(Baskar) odds described you as you are the full moon
That's what I told the fact
otherwise i won't attract you from my side
You wrote, I would not go back, trust me
why did you say like that
don't ruin your life, First job,then be support your family financially, and finally get bright future. can you understand?
You promise me first and then I think to continue to communicate or not with you
murugan
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hi murugan
just read my message and u'll know everything
just read my message and u'll know everything
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double o.k
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i'm waiting ur reply right now
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Re: It's time
SEEMS VERY GOOD POEM
I READ IT AND I LIKE IT MUCH
VERY GOOD
I READ IT AND I LIKE IT MUCH
VERY GOOD
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thank farah for ur comment it's lovely to see u again
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Nice sharing.
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thanks for ur comment
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So heart touching and sad
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maybe one day i'll smile form ny heart
thanx for ur comment
thanx for ur comment
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One you will smile from your heart? Do you mean you smile from your kidney now?
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of course no and i know ur joking but u can say i'm wearing a mask o cover myself
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GOOD post sweets, keep on sharing.
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Hi sweets. I really like your poem. But sad to note letting go of the past is really hard.Hai.....life...
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thanx for ur comment cuteboy but u know sometimes u have to let past go to go on ur life
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nice! I like it sweets :)
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oh krisi thanx for u comment