Writing Help

[jnrntr]

I am writing this email for registration into 2011 XXX Summer School.

Please find the attached completed registration form.

I am student under Professor XXXX.



//This is a email i am writing to another professor about the registration for summer school is the e mail grammatically correct ?

[Joe]

I am writing this email for registration with the 2011 XXX Summer School.

Please find attached the completed registration form.

I am a student under Professor XXXX.