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Re: you're poor

Postby shakespear » Wed May 18, 2011 10:27 pm

hello
u r so welcome and i hope we can communicate more in future...
have nice moments
c u
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Re: you're poor

Postby shakespear » Tue Aug 23, 2011 8:52 am

hi
i wana collect my poems and issu them in one topic
wt u say?
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Re: you're poor

Postby Lara » Sat Sep 10, 2011 7:07 pm

Hi again ! i this is a sad poem, was this poem about u or about anyone else?
Well noanimal is upper than a human, and besides u mentioned above, also a person is poor when he/she lacks of knowledge or feelings and thoughts... have a lovely day u 2 :)
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Re: you're poor

Postby shakespear » Wed Sep 14, 2011 2:09 am

i meant there r rich ppl treat poor ppl like animals or may b less than animals and may b treat their dogs or cats better than the poor
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Re: you're poor

Postby Lara » Wed Sep 14, 2011 4:13 am

So in this case, these "rich people" are the poor ones, their heart is poor.
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Re: you're poor

Postby shakespear » Thu Sep 15, 2011 9:02 am

woooooooow
i think its rich expression
thnx 4 this expression
have good day
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Re: you're poor

Postby shakespear » Thu Oct 13, 2011 10:41 pm

who is the poor one in this world????
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Re: you're poor

Postby Lara » Fri Oct 14, 2011 4:40 am

humm Shakespear dont make me say names :lol:
the one who doesnt appreciate friendship and the one who just care about him/her and not about the others, and the one u mentioned in ur poem, the rich guy who thinks money is all in his life.
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Re: you're poor

Postby muruganji » Fri Oct 14, 2011 1:45 pm

Respected Lara (Please ignore the above one)
the one who doesnt appreciate friendship - That is True.
the one who just care about him/her and not about the others- That is not true, Don't Hurry and decided. Then There is no difference in between you and me. I considered, you are really great one.

As Shakes told you should go for good things along with everybody except me(Bad thing).

I will not come anymore in the ring

I hope, Shakes may be forgive me in future

But I will read your(Shakes) forthcoming poems without your permission

regards
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Re: you're poor

Postby Lara » Fri Oct 14, 2011 8:35 pm

Hello respected Murugan

I wanna u to know my heart cries out for peace between us, does ur heart also ask u for that? :-D
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