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Eve & Adam

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Re: Eve & Adam

Postby shakespear » Tue Feb 01, 2011 8:34 pm

hello
u r welcome any time and i am very happy to meet u and chat with u . really i like u to post me comments and don't mind if u have something to explain it about my poems even if u have critical views plz say anything u feel about them
thnx and i wanna read ur comments
have lovely times
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Re: Eve & Adam

Postby shakespear » Fri Feb 04, 2011 7:44 pm

manar wrote:hi shakespear

what i wanna say is that u r a wonderful poet
ur words touch me

so,keep it up,

really u encourged me much
thanks lots
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Re: Eve & Adam

Postby sweethuman » Sun May 22, 2011 11:08 am

Nice
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Re: Eve & Adam

Postby Krisi » Tue May 31, 2011 1:17 am

A woman can feel if the person is true or not. :-)
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Re: Eve & Adam

Postby shakespear » Tue Jun 14, 2011 5:35 am

that's r8 koz she has soft, transparent,gauzy heart so she can see through it but although she can see the truth and false but if she loves she can leave whom she loves i.e although she knows the deceiver but she can't quit or leave koz she loved him, she is loyal and this loyalty makes her weak, she is romantic and this romance makes her easy-deceived
thanks 4 ur comments
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Re: Eve & Adam

Postby shakespear » Sun Sep 11, 2011 1:39 am

hi all
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Re: Eve & Adam

Postby Lara » Sun Sep 11, 2011 5:17 am

hmm well i wouldnt like to remember my bad memories, but those ones are stronger than the good ones, and they will be in our memories, healed but still there.
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Re: Eve & Adam

Postby shakespear » Tue Sep 13, 2011 10:42 pm

man is known as a hard and not sotf vise versa the woman ,,,she is known as soft , kind
but sometimes there are men more soft than women and follow thier lover to eadge of abyss
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Re: Eve & Adam

Postby shakespear » Tue Oct 18, 2011 4:38 am

shakespear wrote:man is known as a hard and not sotf vise versa the woman ,,,she is known as soft , kind
but sometimes there are men more soft than women and follow thier lover to eadge of abyss



is this right or false??//
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