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by **sweets** » Thu Sep 15, 2011 5:07 pm

(this is m first poem after almost a year .. ..)

how hard to cry without tears
how hard to go without return
how hard to feel annoyed and no one to share
how hard to speak voiceless ..

to live and wait your death
to live inside bubble
without freind ..without lover
and feel that joy will never come
discovered you get a pain and no one to cure

how hard to say hi ..... how easy to say bye

by **shakespear** » Thu Sep 15, 2011 9:24 pm

to live and wait your death
to live inside bubble
without freind ..without lover
and feel that joy will never come

welcome friend...its marvelous poem and i wana congratulate u koz u come back.....
really lovely lines and i hope to write more and more...have lovely times

by **sweets** » Fri Sep 16, 2011 10:11 am

thanx dear but i do not knw i feel it needs much to work on what do you think ?

by **muruganji** » Fri Sep 16, 2011 6:59 pm

Dear Sweets

No use

A female's tears can thin (dilute) a stone- It is Indian Proverb

Do not look back, go forward, bright future is waiting for you

Get Last

Elder Brother Muruganji

by **sweets** » Sat Sep 17, 2011 4:08 pm

muruganji wrote:Dear Sweets

No use

A female's tears can thin (dilute) a stone- It is Indian Proverb

Do not look back, go forward, bright future is waiting for you

Get Last

Elder Brother Muruganji

you can not change my mind

by **Lara** » Mon Sep 19, 2011 6:19 pm

sweets wrote:how hard to cry without tears
how hard to go without return
how hard to feel annoyed and no one to share
how hard to speak voiceless ..

almost everything on earth is inevitable,everything has its consequences whether good or bad.
Nice poem :)

by **sweets** » Tue Sep 20, 2011 5:42 am

thanx dear 4 ur comment have a sweet day

by **sweets** » Sat Sep 24, 2011 5:20 pm

no more comments or wht?????????

by **shakespear** » Sun Sep 25, 2011 3:35 am

hi friend
sometimes simple words can express lots of meanings and sometimes we don't speak but we show lots of meaning...
have nice moments

by **sweets** » Sun Sep 25, 2011 4:24 am

i do not knw when u check our old poems (you and me ) we had much to comment to talk sometimes we comment in poetry we were like fire & butterfly do you remember those days i really miss them at least i found a reason to write to comment a sense of challenge

i guess u got bored or sometimehing like that
wht do you think??????

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