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ENDLESS DAY

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Re: ENDLESS DAY

Postby asdfghjkl » Tue Mar 10, 2009 3:48 pm

It's a nice poem with a rich meaning.
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Re: ENDLESS DAY

Postby (((Edu))) » Tue Mar 10, 2009 7:31 pm

Cool... very cool.
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Re: ENDLESS DAY

Postby shakespear » Wed Mar 25, 2009 1:40 pm

hi every one
thanks 4 this comment
and i hope the best times 4 u
i hope we can meet continuously
our life is like a night mare
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Re: ENDLESS DAY

Postby shakespear » Sat Oct 16, 2010 6:51 pm

shakespear wrote:Can you – please – look at me merrily?
My winter always needs your spring
Can you – please – talk with me slowly?
When you speak you seem to sing
You speak not in words but in rhyme
Everything in the world is worthless
I enjoy hearing you for long time
And my day, then would be endless


comment plz
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Re: ENDLESS DAY

Postby Lara » Sun Sep 11, 2011 3:51 pm

shakespear wrote:My winter always needs your spring

when we are in loved we feel we depend on the other person, everthing is around her/him, nice poem Shakespear :)
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Re: ENDLESS DAY

Postby shakespear » Mon Sep 12, 2011 4:41 am

thnx friend and hope hear sth new from u ....u have to try new poem....
have good luck
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Re: ENDLESS DAY

Postby Krisi » Mon Sep 12, 2011 10:40 am

a very nice poem. Thanks for tirelessly sharing with us your writings.

I still think love is true but, I think I am not just lucky when it comes to love. I guess the definition of true love changes if you will feel hatred and heartaches always.
As of now, I am thinking how life would be without love, care and compassion for one another. Will we still walk with emotion? Will we still see appreciation on one's face? Will we still see the values or meaning of what we do and say? I do hope there still will remain good values for mankind... an endless day indeed.
Good luck to you.
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Re: ENDLESS DAY

Postby Lara » Mon Sep 12, 2011 1:56 pm

Yeah, actually i have a new one, i will show u soon, it needs to completed first :D
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Re: ENDLESS DAY

Postby shakespear » Sat Sep 17, 2011 9:00 am

krisi my friend
really ur comment is very strong and holds rich meanings among its words and i do hope u always send comments on our poems to enrich us in addition toour poems....i think u'll add a value to our writings...
thnx 4 this lovely comment
best wishes
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Re: ENDLESS DAY

Postby shakespear » Mon Oct 17, 2011 11:57 am

hi
i hope u r so happy
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