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IT IS MY HEART

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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby shakespear » Wed Aug 03, 2011 8:54 am

hi
thnx 4 that
c u
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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby Lara » Wed Sep 28, 2011 5:03 am

shakespear wrote:Tell me the truth, don`t lie on me!
Did you still love me and keep my heart`s key?
Did you forget our vivid love at the sea?
Call me an` you`ll see me creep on knee
Isn`t enough to stay with me and …
Water our love tree?


Ur heart is doubting about her love, or what she feels for u. People always have a sixth sense when something is not right.
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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby shakespear » Thu Sep 29, 2011 11:05 am

Lara wrote:People always have a sixth sense when something is not right


now its psychology and u talked about sixth sense ...really i know little about it and i wish u talk us about it and make us know more about it
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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby Lara » Thu Sep 29, 2011 6:46 pm

Shakespear!!!
I meant with sixth sense that we always have a foreboding or presentiment of anything is wrong with the other person(in this case your heart doubts about her feelings; in the poem).
Also sixth sense is not only when u have a presentiment of wrong things, they also can be good thigs; It's a feeling that u know something will happen.

I hope u have understood what i said. C U :-D
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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby shakespear » Sat Oct 01, 2011 2:02 pm

yeah
thnx 4 this explanation
have good day
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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby shakespear » Mon Oct 17, 2011 11:02 am

i hope u all be happy
i pray god keep u safe
have nice moments
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