Our Time
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Let’s enjoy our moment, don’t wait for a signal
Time is our enemy; if we wait I’ll lose you
Time is laughing at us, it’ll steal our happiness
Our feelings will be erased from our minds
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I don’t want to wait anymore
Follow me and don’t ask me why?
Give me your hand, don’t be hesitated
Don’t think, just stay here with me
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Let’s take pleasure in our love
If you feel love, then, don’t deny
Don’t refuse me, don’t falter
Do not doubt my love for you
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Time is against our love, do not delay
Time doesn’t forgive, it won’t forgive us
Do you have another choice? I don’t
Time is going to take our love
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I am still here waiting for you
Don’t let me go, I don’t want
Time comes and goes, ours is going
Our love story goes with it
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Sky is the witness of my love
It is sad, because our time is gone
My feelings and you went with it
Now you're just a memory no more
Our Time
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Re: Our Time
woooooooow at last its the fantastic poem although it is sad but we have here some thing fantastic..it is piece of high style...the stanza above, my point of view, is the greatest one in the poem..in general, the poem expresses the sadness and melancholy and its regarded one of the greatest poems i've ever read....Lara wrote:I am still here waiting for you
Don’t let me go, I don’t want
Time comes and goes, ours is going
Our love story goes with it
i hope in future u keep rhyme and try to poetize with rhyme if u like that and don't feel tired of that
.....good luck and go ahead my friend.....
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Re: Our Time
Shakespear, thanks alot for this comment, thanks for ur friendship, and i promise i will use rhyme(it's hard) hahah :) ... u encourage with every comment of urs :) see youshakespear wrote: i hope in future u keep rhyme and try to poetize with rhyme if u like that and don't feel tired of that
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U R WELCOME ....i'm happy 2 hear that from u and i wish in the next poem i read rhymed poem...
go ahead and don't fear difficult things...burn a candle instead of cursing the darkness....
go ahead and don't fear difficult things...burn a candle instead of cursing the darkness....
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Re: Our Time
Thanks for this advise :)
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Re: Our Time
plz we all are waiting another poem so plz hurry up...thnx
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Re: Our Time
Why the hurry? do not be impatient
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mmm i think we have to hurry up koz poems are like springs if u take much water from them they'll flow more and more...so take much from ur mind and don't stint to show ur poems...Lara wrote:Why the hurry? do not be impatient
have nice moments
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Re: Our Time
Well i think im thirsty and i need to drink water from that spring to not to be thirsty anymore.
i wanna show a quote which is written in the Bible and it's similar to what u said:
"but whoever drinks the water I give them will never thirst. Indeed, the water I give them will become in them a spring of water welling up to eternal life.” John 4:14
Hope u like it!
i wanna show a quote which is written in the Bible and it's similar to what u said:
"but whoever drinks the water I give them will never thirst. Indeed, the water I give them will become in them a spring of water welling up to eternal life.” John 4:14
Hope u like it!
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Re: Our Time
is it poem in this section?...oh that's a pity i don't know really poems in english...i mean how to do it!!!
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Hello tandvictor nice to meet u, well i think u can, dont say no, u just have to use ur imagination and to be inspired by anything...also u can comments poems here. hope u enjoy this site, see you friend
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Re: Our Time
hi friends
have nice moments
have nice moments