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Postby Elisa » Tue Oct 18, 2011 6:08 pm

I met you
Your eyes,
My eyes.
Your breath,
My breath
Your smile,
My smile.

No words.

Our breath.
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Re: WE

Postby Elisa » Tue Oct 18, 2011 6:10 pm

Please, read it very slowly. Thanks :-)
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Postby sweets » Tue Oct 18, 2011 7:17 pm

helllllllo
inspite of writing short lines but they are carrying much powerful meanings beside your short poem force me to imagen what might happen ..............

nice try keep on
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Re: WE

Postby shakespear » Tue Oct 18, 2011 10:46 pm

hello
i'll say like the say of sweets its short...but rain always starts with one drop then falls heavily and may not stop for days...and volcano also starts with smoke then busrsts out and won't stop...
so i think u'll rain this club with lovely words heavily and won't stop...at least i hope that...
plz go ahead and dont stop koz ur words hold high emotions and lovely meanings inside
have good luck
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Re: WE

Postby Elisa » Wed Oct 19, 2011 12:04 am

thanks, you are very sweet.
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Re: WE

Postby Lara » Wed Oct 19, 2011 3:01 am

Elisa wrote:I met you
Your eyes,
My eyes.
Your breath,
My breath
Your smile,
My smile.

No words.

Our breath.


Hello Eli, how r u??? :-D
It seems when u met him u couldnt say any word, am i right??
hope u be well c u
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Re: WE

Postby Elisa » Wed Oct 19, 2011 2:11 pm

I am very, very fine and you?

I think love doesn't need many words.
when we are really in love we cannot speak and we look like a stupid, silly girl!!!:)
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Postby Lara » Wed Oct 19, 2011 2:17 pm

:D yes u r right, it's better not to talk to not to say silly words :lol:
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Re: WE

Postby shakespear » Sat Nov 12, 2011 8:52 am

Elisa wrote:I think love doesn't need many words.


that's r8...
when we meet our beloved we have astonishment ....and looking at the eyes is sweeter than saying words...looking while our breath r met also

its lovely expression
plz try again its expressing poem.....move one to the place of event...
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Re: WE

Postby Elisa » Sat Nov 12, 2011 5:01 pm

Shak. I cannot speak well English and I don't understand the meaning of these words:"move on to the place of event".
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