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A woman's sorrow

How long do I have to wait?
To torture my self and blame?
I couldn't ignore you or hate
Fire inside my heart does flame
You are my love, my soul mate
All things to you seems the same
*******************************
All women, like me, are weak
You don't care for my bad fire
We always search love and seek
And we try to hide our ire
Come touch my skin, it's so sleek
I have lust, I have desire
*******************************
My life will not last forever
So come relax my mind
With you I feel in fever
Killing eyes, I'm like a hind
Show me your lust, don't cover
Like my charm, where will you find?
You will still my sweet lover
I loved, really love is blind
*******************************
You got your wish and you went
I dream with you, spend the nights
Our days will soon end, they're lent
So come dear and burn the lights
Your home is my heart, you rent
With me you'll get touching sights
*******************************
Did the bird find another nest?
So why does the dove coo alone?
For years, she looks towards the west
And hopes him stop her hard moan
She waits and waits, she does her best
None's on skyline, she won't leave groan
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my dear friend u alawys impress my thoughts heart and mind iwill post total comment when i back home cu
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hello
i'm waiting ur comment...
i hope u r very well....
regards
c u
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shakespear wrote: You got your wish and you went
I dream with you, spend the nights
Our days will soon end, they're lent
So come dear and burn the lights
Your home is my heart, you rent
With me you'll get touching sights
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Did the bird find another nest?
So why does the dove coo alone?
For years, she looks towards the west
And hopes him stop her hard moan
She waits and waits, she does her best
None's on skyline, she won't leave groan
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Hi Shakespear!!! It's a wOnderful poem...well in the poem u r waiting for her, but it has been a long time, now u tells her what's happening, althoug u has spent much time you still have hope she responds...So i tell u that hope is the last thing we lose...so dont give up.
I loved this phrase : "Did the bird find another nest?" C U friend
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hi friend
i think u reserved the meaning koz she is waiting him not he and i hope u find the mistake...c u and have nice day
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shakespear wrote:You got your wish and you went


:!!: oops...yes im sorry for that..well in this case maybe she made a mistake...she gave all for him, and he just wanned pleasure, maybe he doesnt come back to her...and she will stay waiting and waiting, and i think all women realize when anyone wont come back, in this case this love is blind.

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hi
in the beginning u reversed the meaning but now u r talking very well.....but i meant by "love is blind " koz we love and don't know if our lovers good or bad and if they r bad we can hate them or ignore them and we still love them in spite of their hurt...
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hmm that's right...but when we really love and realize our love is bad the best thing we could do is to let him go and not to hate him..because if we continue with him it will be worst, and then the wound would be deeper {-:
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ok
real love...if we have real love so we can't leave our lover although he/she is bad...we'll close our eyes ...we can't see our lover's badness, we see just his softness and beauty...we can't stop loving him/her....i know we'd better leave him/her ...but...
could we??????
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shakespear wrote:could we??????


hmmm maybe if she/he wanna change we may give her/him a chance..but if she/he doesnt get it so the last thing we can do is to let her/him go, it's what i think
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ok
may be u can...but i can't really koz we'll be connected strongly..
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hmm yeah those our point of views, they r completely different :D and i respect urs :-D
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ok
that is very well koz i respect ur idea also
have nice moments
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thanks to all my friends
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hi
it's the first time that you are talking in figure of woman it's so goood ,well as a respons for that i answered this poem with a poem in man's figure as an answer to ur lady ;-) ;-) i hope to read and enjoy with.........................................

My dear lady I'm here
Just look well
You only didn't me watch well

I'm here and there
I'm in everywhere
You are only what I see ..i hear and talk about
How you could not note that ????

How you could not note my eyes saving you from others
How you couldn't touch my warmth in cold days ??

Your bird did not leave your nest till now
But with your careless ..sure it'll do that
Instead of waiting look at here forget west
I'm not expecting ur best
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hello
congratulations
u come back and we, ur friends all of us, r happy for ur coming back and we hope u show us lovely and new poems which always u used to show us...
in this poem u took a figure of man as i did in the my poem and i think we exchanged the roles ...i don't know but i think i'm feel pleased to play the role of woman and feel how the woman feels ...
sweets wrote:You only didn't me watch well
i think u'd better say: You only didn't watch me well
another thing :u got the subject befor the auxiliary read the following:
sweets wrote:How you could not note that ????
you needn;t do that and u can easily put the aux b4 the subject
another thing: u put preposition b4 adjective and this is wrong koz "careless" not noun its adjective...u have to use "carelessness" read the following:
sweets wrote:But with your careless ..sure it'll do that
any way ur poem is a reply to my poem and u inspired me to write another one in the same style ..u encouraged me
ur poem is full of valuable words which have deep meanings and i hope i read anothre poem like this lovely poem
congratulations twice for ur coming back and for this poem
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thanx 4 correcting my mistakes in fact i wrote it this morning b4 going 2 work anyway thank u so much*
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hi sweets
really i regreted correcting ur mistakes koz i thought u would be angry and i had to make private msg and informed u about ur mistakes...anyway i hope u r not angry for this fault and plz accept my apology my friend...
i ask u to issue it in saparated topic ..i meant new topic after correct it ....plz examine it and correct then issue it in new topic
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why shall i do that ???????????? you know my opinon about corrections and so on and we disscused that more than one time .......
anyway next poem i promise to be more carefull
but if i post this as new post i'll post as it's without any simple correction is it fine ??
so shall i wait a reply to my reply or u'll write new thing ???????????????????


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hi
ok do wtever u like and dont worry about that
feel free plz
thnx 4 this comment
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sure i'll feel free

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hello
so what did u decide to do? issue it or not? really i prefer u issue it after correct ...its urs ..u created it and gave it ur idea..ur words...

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How could you write about woman's sorrow since you're a man? Are you sure of how women feel?
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hi may be u r right in this point but i imagine the sorrow of woman and try to transmigrate the role of a woman and write sad feelings of her...any way nice to hear ur point of view...have nice moments
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It is not easy to transmigrate a personality of some one specially if it is not the same sex.it is a lie...u r a female not a male.
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farah wrote:It is not easy to transmigrate a personality of some one specially if it is not the same sex.it is a lie...u r a female not a male.
u can make sure of that if u come here near me....
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Cool Cool info for me. :lol:
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shahidsaif wrote:Cool Cool info for me. :lol:
what does that means??
plz explain it...any way thanks lots
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hi can u guess who am i shakespear??
be urself
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hi all my friends...
dreamer...really idk...but ur name is so lovely...we all need to dream and fly in the blue sky...have nice moments...
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hi dreamer.....at last i could know u...but really if u didnt help me i couldn't know u ....any way i'm so happy to meet u again and know about u....
thnx to help me knowing u...
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shakespear wrote:A woman's sorrow

How long do I have to wait?
To torture my self and blame?
I couldn't ignore you or hate
Fire inside my heart does flame
You are my love, my soul mate
All things to you seems the same
*******************************
All women, like me, are weak
You don't care for my bad fire
We always search love and seek
And we try to hide our ire
Come touch my skin, it's so sleek
I have lust, I have desire
*******************************
My life will not last forever
So come relax my mind
With you I feel in fever
Killing eyes, I'm like a hind
Show me your lust, don't cover
Like my charm, where will you find?
You will still my sweet lover
I loved, really love is blind
*******************************
You got your wish and you went
I dream with you, spend the nights
Our days will soon end, they're lent
So come dear and burn the lights
Your home is my heart, you rent
With me you'll get touching sights
*******************************
Did the bird find another nest?
So why does the dove coo alone?
For years, she looks towards the west
And hopes him stop her hard moan
She waits and waits, she does her best
None's on skyline, she won't leave groan
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imagine the sorrow of this woman...wt's her end???
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I LIKE THIS POEM BECAUSE IT EMBODIES THE SORROW OF A WOMAN
we have to live our life freely
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do u have sorrow like hers???
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shakespear wrote:ok
real love...if we have real love so we can't leave our lover although he/she is bad...we'll close our eyes ...we can't see our lover's badness, we see just his softness and beauty...we can't stop loving him/her....i know we'd better leave him/her ...but...
could we??????
what is real love?
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what do u think about real love???
i answered u by a question...ok ?
when u answer u'll find the answer for ur question
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that's not the answer to my question. I asked you that same question so it couldn't be the answer.

is there real love and untrue love? love is love. So, I guess it is either love and a lie only.
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aha ok, may be u r r8...but i meant another thing...if u look at the matter u can't find but 1 love....but wt u call the love of the mother to her baby? wt u call the love of the son to his parents, wt u call the love of one to the beauty of a soul mate, some love the beauty of nature, some love sex, some love money, some love prestige position, reign, rule, authority, control......etc.
all these things comes under the concept of love
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shakespear wrote:aha ok, may be u r r8...but i meant another thing...if u look at the matter u can't find but 1 love....but wt u call the love of the mother to her baby? wt u call the love of the son to his parents, wt u call the love of one to the beauty of a soul mate, some love the beauty of nature, some love sex, some love money, some love prestige position, reign, rule, authority, control......etc.
all these things comes under the concept of love
I guess you mistook love for like and vice versa.
For me, I do not use love for a thing or situation because they have no feelings. I can use the word love to human beings and my pet dogs. But, I don't know how others differentiate this. And, from what you have stated above they are all the same to you.
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mmmm so do u differ between all these kinds of love??if 1 says to his girlfriend" i like u" wt this means??
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shakespear wrote:mmmm so do u differ between all these kinds of love??if 1 says to his girlfriend" i like u" wt this means??
I guess, it's because we have different beliefs. This is also why I raised the question, "What is real love?"

About your last question, I am sorry, I cannot answer that because I am a female. I really don't know when (or where else) do you use the word, "like". You see, a female friend of your friend (who is a boy or girl) is also a girl friend...then also for lovers, the male/boy use the same word also to introduce his sweetheart.
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may be we r not correspondent but we understand each other....i got wt u like to say and i think u got wt i wana say...WE r different because our ambiences, milieu..... r different
there r many topics and matters which r different according to the style and general form of my life and urs....
do you know some of these topics and matters??????
for instant; the shame, shyness, freedom,religion, sin and sinful...all these r different
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shakespear wrote:may be we r not correspondent but we understand each other....i got wt u like to say and i think u got wt i wana say...WE r different because our ambiences, milieu..... r different
there r many topics and matters which r different according to the style and general form of my life and urs....
do you know some of these topics and matters??????
for instant; the shame, shyness, freedom,religion, sin and sinful...all these r different
I know some but not much just a bit. That's why sometimes I am hesitant to reply on your questions because I might be misunderstood only even if I have no bad intentions. Sometimes little differences become worst (even among friends) if some words has been misunderstood.
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Even if our views differ and will remain friends because friendship beyond anything bigger than a misunderstanding, that's what I think, and thought to be a true, so i please you to express any opinion you find it appropriate and you will find me receptive for your opinion
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You must have a human history of mental maturity to be able to accept the opinions of others, no matter how extreme, as long as the upholding of religion and public morals
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it's very good in my opinion !
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beginner wrote:it's very good in my opinion !
which is good , poem or my opinion:
shakespear wrote:You must have a human history of mental maturity to be able to accept the opinions of others, no matter how extreme, as long as the upholding of religion and public morals
any way thanks for your participation
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