Moon might mean a mark.

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Moon might mean a mark.

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Watch the full moon !
This fun cartoon !
This only clown
Says "See you soon !"

Moon at first sight,
Is a weak light.
But in the night,
She wins the fight.

More than a shark,
Low in the park
This is a spark,
High in the dark.

What does it mean ?
This little bean
Doesn't seem clean,
But is the dean.
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hi friend
i think its lovely poem ...lyrical and joyful...its interesting ...but really i can't tell u wt means that ...may be it riddle...any i interested in reading it..
shokin wrote:What does it mean ?
This little bean
Doesn't seem clean,
But is the dean.
have good time friend..
good luck
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Thanks Shoking for your poem.
Moon like some people in our world look like "bean but are dean".
Have nice days.
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shakespear wrote:hi friend
i think its lovely poem ...lyrical and joyful...its interesting ...but really i can't tell u wt means that ...may be it riddle...any i interested in reading it..
shokin wrote:What does it mean ?
This little bean
Doesn't seem clean,
But is the dean.
What does the moon mean (for men and women) ?
When you watch the sky, the moon looks like a little bean.
And this bean is not totally white but a bit grey... not very clean, I mean.
But actually... the moon is the dean (like a dean of university).

Good moon, good mood !
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Moon means that there is always a hope also when all is dark.
It is the place of our dreams. It is the eternal change.

If you pay attention when people are looking at the moon ,they always smile.
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hi
i agree with u elisa that moon always expresses hope, beam...
and also it gives us pleasure but i ddnt understand the term:
shokin wrote:Watch the full moon !
This fun cartoon !
This only clown
Says "See you soon !"
i think the poet wana say the moon is funny, interesting and it doesn't last long...its like all lovely things doesn't last long.. for instance we have spring...lovely season but its lasts just little not long...
ok thnx and have good days
regards
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Hello Shokin,

[quote="shokin"]Watch the full moon !
This fun cartoon !
This only clown

Says "See you soon !"[/quote]

I liked when u said "says see you soon"....moon is loyal and it will always be, and when we have a mark it stays in us forever :-D then "moon might be a mark" Nice poem
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Moon shines of reflected light and, as every things in this world, it is just an illusion!
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