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Visits the world

Postby LaiYiwen » Mon Nov 28, 2011 1:21 am

Hi , Travel let the human relaxation mood .
Go to different Country see to different Culture . {-:
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Re: Visits the world

Postby sdluk » Tue Nov 29, 2011 6:15 am

LaiYiwen wrote:Hi , Travel let the human relaxation mood .
Go to different Country see to different Culture . {-:


Hi LaiYewen, How are you? :-)

Here is a correct form -

Hi, Travelling puts a human in a relaxing mood. So, go to various countries and experience various cultures. (Remember, 'travel' is a verb and 'travelling' is a noun.Plus, we experience 'cultures' we can't see it. It's not an object, it's a thought or an idea.)
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Re: Visits the world

Postby LaiYiwen » Wed Nov 30, 2011 5:34 am

Thank you for your e-mail.
I am a student .
I am learning English though my English is not good .
I am improving every day.
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Re: Visits the world

Postby LaiYiwen » Thu Dec 01, 2011 2:39 pm

sdluk wrote:
LaiYiwen wrote:Hi , Travel let the human relaxation mood .
Go to different Country see to different Culture . {-:


Hi LaiYewen, How are you? :-)

Here is a correct form -

Hi, Travelling puts a human in a relaxing mood. So, go to various countries and experience various cultures. (Remember, 'travel' is a verb and 'travelling' is a noun.Plus, we experience 'cultures' we can't see it. It's not an object, it's a thought or an idea.)

Thank you for your e-mail.
I am a student .
I am learning English though my English is not good .
I am improving every day.
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Re: Visits the world

Postby arthoniel » Fri Dec 02, 2011 8:01 am

sdluk wrote:
LaiYiwen wrote:Hi , Travel let the human relaxation mood .
Go to different Country see to different Culture . {-:


Hi LaiYewen, How are you? :-)

Here is a correct form -

Hi, Travelling puts a human in a relaxing mood. So, go to various countries and experience various cultures. (Remember, 'travel' is a verb and 'travelling' is a noun.Plus, we experience 'cultures' we can't see it. It's not an object, it's a thought or an idea.)


to be more correct you would say relaxed instead of relaxing. :) Relaxing is a verb, and describes what you are doing ("I'm relaxing") but relaxed is how you feel and is more of the emotion of the word :)
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Re: Visits the world

Postby HUANGYIHXUAN » Mon Dec 05, 2011 1:36 am

hello:))
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Re: Visits the world

Postby chenyingchun » Wed Dec 07, 2011 6:52 am

Hi~
Nice to me you.
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