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Mengci
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Recently, I love
He told me very, very good
Good care of me to protect me
Sometimes, like Valentine
Sometimes as a friend
I always feel very happy
We are very dependent on each other
I am happy I talk to him
I would like to share this joy
Bless their happy day
Everyone is happy
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Krisi
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Mengci wrote:Recently, I love
He told me very, very good
Good care of me to protect me
Sometimes, like Valentine
Sometimes as a friend
I always feel very happy
We are very dependent on each other
I am happy I talk to him
I would like to share this joy
Bless their happy day
Everyone is happy
how is your love now? :)
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anayariz
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Post by anayariz »

very nice ,lovely posts thanks for sharing
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Post by Marunos »

It's a very nice poem :)
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Post by amylee »

I really like your poem!! :)
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Post by piksel »

really nice :) is it your own idea? :)
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