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how can i recast this sentence?

Postby nandana » Mon Jul 08, 2013 5:19 pm

It's a pleasant sight to watch the burning sun bleed into the azure sea, under the gloaming sky.
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Re: how can i recast this sentence?

Postby Tukanja » Fri Jul 12, 2013 1:08 pm

Let me try

A burning sun bleeding into the sea under the gloaming sky over the Cote d'azure was an enchanting sight.
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