I am now in the day, the day when suddenly the darkness come and covered the world, and I become blind since then.. all I can only see shadows.. It come and go with a silence.. and.. without I realize, the darkness has become a part of me..
Within the darkness.. everything are so quiet.. so..hurtful... The sparkle that used to be my guardian.. its gone.. gone like an ash.. it didnt left anything. When I am silence... noone around.. nothing to feel.. nothing to reach.."where is my sparkle?" I asked myself..
"I am scared.. my sparkle's gone..." "What should I do?" I cried and cried... tried to yell, but... no voice comes out... only tears were falling down.. I tried to look for something.. anything.. but only darkness and silence Ive found... the more I ve tried the powerless I am.. I cried and cried again.. til I am fall asleep, but when I wake up.. everything still the same... silence... I sat..hugged my self..staring...wandering and wandering..
Help me..
Silence in Darkness
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Re: Silence in Darkness
We cannot perceive the light without the darkness.
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Re: Silence in Darkness
hi
i think it's a short story...there's an expression in it....i think u speak about a nightmare and the darkness and how it's dreadful...there are some mistakes in ur story...i hope u revise it and discover them...
go ahead...u r very good
c u
i think it's a short story...there's an expression in it....i think u speak about a nightmare and the darkness and how it's dreadful...there are some mistakes in ur story...i hope u revise it and discover them...
go ahead...u r very good
c u
our life is like a night mare
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Re: Silence in Darkness
frankly ........thanx to share us with your first steps of ur writing but u should more next time realy good that was owsome.............
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Re: Silence in Darkness
"we can't percieve the light without the darkness" . Indeed. The way our mind work is to compare which matchs and which does not match. it works by similarity or contrast. It's the way used by our computers as well.
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Re: Silence in Darkness
When ....
When you open your eyes, I do see the hanging garden of Babylon*** When you smile, the world be a light*** When you whisper, I do hear a ninghtingale song *** When you stand up, the sun rise*** If I were an Angel, I would descend from the heaven *** If I were a dolphin, I would leave the sea*** If I were the sun, I would rise by night, *** to be beside you***
When you open your eyes, I do see the hanging garden of Babylon*** When you smile, the world be a light*** When you whisper, I do hear a ninghtingale song *** When you stand up, the sun rise*** If I were an Angel, I would descend from the heaven *** If I were a dolphin, I would leave the sea*** If I were the sun, I would rise by night, *** to be beside you***
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Re: Silence in Darkness
Thank you fore expressing such a true feeling. Who may have got like those feelings always find out the way towards him(herself), towards the quietness, towards the happyness