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by nosvnn
Thu Aug 06, 2009 7:29 am
Forum: Help Each Other with English
Topic: Please help me evaluate this essay
Replies: 3
Views: 5212

Re: Please help me evaluate this essay

Hello Paul, I really appreciate your response. You have mentioned the problem that I usually have in my writing. I used to think that using idioms in essays would make the readers feel more interested, moreover, the examiners would assume that I have a wide vocabulary. Now, I should avoid them. Anyw...
by nosvnn
Wed Jul 22, 2009 6:00 pm
Forum: Help Each Other with English
Topic: Please help me evaluate this essay
Replies: 3
Views: 5212

Please help me evaluate this essay

Hi, I wrote an essay according to the following topic. Please help me mark it in the range from 1 to 5 points. It would be so much better if you point out mistakes in the writing. The topic: Some people say that the internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to...