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by gura
Thu Sep 17, 2009 11:34 pm
Forum: Help Each Other with English
Topic: Constitutional Day 1 page synopsis
Replies: 1
Views: 2605

Re: Constitutional Day 1 page synopsis

I made some numeric usage mistakes and some grammar mistakes. How does it look now? Thank you!! US and Irish Constitutions: a celebration of Constitution Day In 1776, the Declaration of Independence, primarily written by Thomas Jefferson, was adopted by the Continental Congress. In 1787, delegates w...
by gura
Thu Sep 17, 2009 3:22 am
Forum: Help Each Other with English
Topic: Constitutional Day 1 page synopsis
Replies: 1
Views: 2605

Constitutional Day 1 page synopsis

Hello. I went to the Constitutional Day ceremony at my college today. My assignment is to write a 1 page synopsis about this. I wrote about today, but I am not sure whether I have SV ageement issues or not, or I have other issues. Please provide me a suggestion. Thank you!! US and Irish Constitution...
by gura
Sat Sep 05, 2009 11:18 pm
Forum: Help Each Other with English
Topic: Please help me to correct my plot summary
Replies: 2
Views: 3217

Re: Please help me to correct my plot summary

Hello. I just found out that my plot summary was mixed with present tense and past tense, so I fixed to all present tense. Do you think it is much better than before, or do I need more effort to fix it? Thank you! Plot Summary: Necklace Necklace is the story of a very poor woman's huge life changes ...
by gura
Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:30 am
Forum: Help Each Other with English
Topic: Please help me to correct my plot summary
Replies: 2
Views: 3217

Please help me to correct my plot summary

Hello. I wrote a plot summary of the short story "Necklace" by Guy De Maupassant. I had to write within 200 to 300 words, but mine was 324 words. I don't know what I should omit. Also, I am not satisfied with my usage of vocabularies, word choosing, and grammar. I appreciate your help! Plot Summary:...
by gura
Sun Aug 09, 2009 1:52 am
Forum: Talking Point Discussion
Topic: Does magic really exist?
Replies: 46
Views: 116440

Re: Does magic really exist?

I have seen Harry Potter. The students were not so good of use of magic at the first time except Harmione. She studies a lot about magic, so she could use each one in different situation. I think it is the same thing as our living. For example, studying English is very hard for me since it is the se...
by gura
Sun Aug 09, 2009 1:28 am
Forum: Talking Point Discussion
Topic: Who cares if rats are used in laboratory experiments?
Replies: 7
Views: 12328

Re: Who cares if rats are used in laboratory experiments?

I love animals. It is very sad if the rats who have not done anything harmful to us are used in laboratory experiments, but we cannot get any important information without the experiment. Scientists are trying their best to figure out how to improve our living, such as how to deal with swine flu, ca...