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rasoolAsal
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Post by rasoolAsal » Fri Aug 17, 2018 7:20 am

Taking care of our elderly was always been an important duty of our life because they had cared use when we were child.
Recently in china people is face a new challenge of elderly care because aging population is in a increasing rate unlike birth rate.
On of the reasons of creation of this phenomenon is for One-child strict policy that had been run for many years.
So what happened is one person should take care of either his parents and grandparents but who can afford it?
China must find a way to solve this issue, otherwise it have to set a big budget to take care of their elderly.

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Re: grammar check

Post by JamesWatson » Sun Aug 19, 2018 10:16 am

1. ...elderly was always been an important... => ...elderly is always an important...
2. ...they had cared use when... => ...they had cared us when...
3. ...in china people is face a new... => ...in China people is facing a new...
4. ...take care of either his parents and grandparents but who can afford it?... => ...take care of both his parents and grandparents. But who can afford it?...

Just for your reference. {-:

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