Ode from inside a jail

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby shakespear » Fri Jun 14, 2013 2:01 pm

hi elisa...yeah i entered the jail for about 11 months then i was released , but after that i felt the jail come inside me.....i think u got the meaning....i meant i'm scared now and i fear my shadow...
any way..its now just memory...
our life is like a night mare

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby Elisa » Fri Jun 14, 2013 4:34 pm

I am so sorry for you. Fear is a bad beast!

Ciao.

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby shakespear » Fri Jun 14, 2013 9:04 pm

thnx 4 ur soft feelings...really i used to fear every thing ...in the street, in the flat, in the scholl, even the bed...its frightful ...some times i awake from sleep and turn my pillow to discover there's nothing...it's tragedy....

where are all my loyal friends...the place seem empty...
why did that happened to this club??
have nice moments
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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby Elisa » Sat Jun 15, 2013 8:40 am

Rich people use psychotherapy, other people use religion...I prefer a bar of good chocolate :)

But ..tell me...What do you think there could be under the pillow?

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby shakespear » Sat Jun 15, 2013 4:13 pm

hi again/

as u said everyone uses sth different to cure self...may b one of us wana escape to uncertain place just to forget the problem....some use religion to dive in worshipping and adoration, to get patience for facing that problem...for me i preter the last one...i mean worshipping...

in that time, i just had got out from my nightmare and i dont know now why i refuged that time to the place under my pillow....may be i was afraid of sth..a bomb or snake or a ghost or some thing else....may be i wanted to become armed against any probable danger so i turned my pollow looking for a gun or a knife or any weapon perhaps i might find there....

these are my thoughts ...may be i'm wrong and i've 2 face my problems once and twice..more and more....till i used to live peacefully....
any way thanks 4 ur interest and hope u nice time....
have nice moments u and all my friends...
good luck
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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby Elisa » Sat Jun 15, 2013 4:49 pm

I am sorry, you seem so sad.

How can I help you... maybe telling you that under your pillow you can find only your pyjama or some money that the tooth fairy left for you... but probably this cannot cheer you up.

I wish you all the best, ciao.

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby shakespear » Sat Jun 15, 2013 7:03 pm

hahahahah.......thnx ...really u seem so funny...ok real friend who wants to give happines to his/her friends
at least u could make me laugh..
thnx again
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