Can You Help Me Review My Writing ???

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kingandsoraka
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Can You Help Me Review My Writing ???

Post by kingandsoraka » Tue Mar 20, 2018 2:16 pm

Hi every one {-: At first thank you all for this site ❤❤

I'm learning english by self-studying , and when I'm writing I need some one to correct my writing , till now I don't know how many mistakes I've alreasy made in this post :mrgreen: ..

I have written this words below and I need to know what do you think about it , from grammer , vocabulary and every thing :-)

(( We grow up every day , getting older day by day, our thinking changes , experiences increase and our imagination expands , but our promises still as they are , deep in our heart , till we can make that dreams we made .. real ))

what do you think ? :roll:

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