Please Check my English and Make me correct

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mohbat
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Please Check my English and Make me correct

Post by mohbat » Wed Jan 22, 2020 10:48 am

Hi,

Today is 22 January 2020 get up early in the morning at 6 AM. Got fresh to wear the jacket and jogging shoes to keep the house keys go downstairs third-floor neighbor came out to go together to the park. The routine walk is about 5 rounds a day but today changed into 8 rounds with 3 extra jogging. This is a pleasant time with the sounds of birds, fresh flowers, a cool environment, and an energetic mind to think about many new ideas as well. A lot of thought came in mind that some are vital so that made the habitual routine of a walk. I want to share one thought of today “How to improve my English writing”  however i read many books, watching movies, listening commentary, social communication, office work, etc. after all that why not skills are improved? Which things are making confusion in writing? These questions remain in mind and other thought came in mind to "write to me". when I will be able to write oneself then easily to write to others.  Onward start to write at least one paragraph of daily routine. 

majid
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Re: Please Check my English and Make me correct

Post by majid » Mon May 18, 2020 8:42 am

Hi mohbat, your essay has a good vocabulary but many grammatical errors. But please don't get dishearted. Begin anew with something simpler. My comments :

Today is 22 January 2020. I got up early in the morning at 6 AM, got fresh to wear the jacket and jogging shoes. I kept the house keys and got downstairs from third floor. My neighbour [''neighbor'' in American English] came out and together we went to the park. The routine walk is about 5 rounds a day but today we changed it into 8 rounds with 3 extra jogging.

What you are trying to write here is something advanced. Please get down to basic, simple things, read simple, basic English books. They'll repair the nuts and bolts of your grammar. Advanced books won't.

Thanks.

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