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Lluisb
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Writing lyrics

Post by Lluisb » Fri Oct 09, 2020 1:08 pm

I’ve been working on this lyrics for weeks but I got stuck on the second verse. Any idea?
What you reckon so far?

Dark places
—————————$
Verse 1
Still I stumble
On the grift you left..
when you left away
I keep trying
And learning how to cope this
——————-
The Past appears
Noisy and louder
suddenly
The engine breaks down

Lost in the riverbed of delusion
Once again the current churns me up

And there’s just silence
Here, wandering there’s only me...
Just circling silence
Here there’s only me in dark...in dark places

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Verse 2



——-

The Past appears
Noisy and louder
suddenly
The engine breaks down

Lost in the riverbed of delusion
Once again the current churns me up

And there’s just silence
Here, wandering there’s only me...
Just circling silence
Here there’s only me in dark...in dark places.

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