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an innocent girl

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Postby Guest » Thu May 20, 2004 5:49 am

I think it shouldn't be the girl's fault.AS lacking in social experience,the one may can't see clearly about her feelings expecially the feeling of love.what love is ?is it a real love?would it be a pity if i pass it by ? It is a wonderful feeling when someone be thoughtful to you .some feelings are so hard to define expecially there is a deceivation.
but as a friend said,no pain ,no gain.experience are from failure.
a pity or a pain ?which would you choose?[quote][/quote]


Re: an innocent girl

Postby RedRose » Fri May 28, 2004 4:12 am

[quote="harriet"]:roll: here i have to tell you a true story about one of my friends,Marina.

hi,shanghai's girl,at first,please pardon me for my sincerity.

ok,I don't think that this is your friend's story,it is YOUR story,I guess.

anyway, although this story is kinda sad, but I think it is necessary or certain for us to undergo some displeasing experiences like that,and it is beneficial for our growths. From these bitter experiences, we can learn what we want and what we should do, in addition, we can do our best to identify who is nice or evil.

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