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To My Best Friend

Postby trannie_nguyen » Mon Jul 21, 2003 6:07 am

I want to tell you that
when I first met you,
I just thought you're dumb,
but now you're really the
best person I've ever met.
I want to tell you that
you're my friend forever
and forever.
When i get in trouble,
you're my protector.
When I cry,
you comfort me.
When I need advise,
you give me some.
You're always on my side,
when i do something bad.
Thanks for reminding me all the time
when i forget.
Thanks for helping me
when i get in trouble.
Thanks for everything
you give me.
You're my best-best friend
Forever, forever, forever...
To love and be loved is the greatest joy on earth.
Love decreases when it ceases to increase

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Re: To My Best Friend

Postby Krisi » Thu Mar 27, 2008 3:25 pm

Good poem!
Someone in the dark


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Re: To My Best Friend

Postby sweets » Fri Mar 28, 2008 8:08 am

ur friend is so lucky to one like u

cheeeeeeeeers
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Re: To My Best Friend

Postby BenM » Fri Mar 28, 2008 1:54 pm

good poem 8)

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Re: To My Best Friend

Postby Sunnypk » Wed Apr 16, 2008 6:19 am

Dear trannie_nguyen
So sweet poem
it's very rightly said that hardly to find such a friends are very difficult.
could we be such a friend?
As you so, so shall you reap

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Re: To My Best Friend

Postby Snowy* » Sat Apr 19, 2008 9:51 am

Nice peom.. :D :D
I wish if I have a good friend to tell her this peom...
:cry: :cry:

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Re: To My Best Friend

Postby Sunnypk » Sat Apr 19, 2008 10:56 am

Snowy* wrote:Nice peom.. :D :D
I wish if I have a good friend to tell her this peom...
:cry: :cry:



hehe I think it takes huge time to let be your friend
As you so, so shall you reap

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Re: To My Best Friend

Postby Snowy* » Tue Apr 22, 2008 8:01 am

Sunnypk wrote:
Snowy* wrote:Nice peom.. :D :D
I wish if I have a good friend to tell her this peom...
:cry: :cry:



hehe I think it takes huge time to let be your friend



:evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil:

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Re: To My Best Friend

Postby Sunnypk » Tue Apr 22, 2008 7:58 pm

Snowy* wrote:
Sunnypk wrote:
Snowy* wrote:Nice peom.. :D :D
I wish if I have a good friend to tell her this peom...
:cry: :cry:



hehe I think it takes huge time to let be your friend



:evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil:



:D :D :D ? don't be anger at me .. was I not right :evil:
As you so, so shall you reap

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Re: To My Best Friend

Postby Snowy* » Fri Apr 25, 2008 9:33 am

:D :D :D ? don't be anger at me .. was I not right


because u r right ... I think i'm angrey :evil: :evil:

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Re: To My Best Friend

Postby Sunnypk » Sat Apr 26, 2008 3:00 am

Snowy* wrote:
:D :D :D ? don't be anger at me .. was I not right


because u r right ... I think i'm [b]angry [/b] :evil: :evil:



hey Don't mind buddy just joking with you :) we are friends :)
As you so, so shall you reap

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Re: To My Best Friend

Postby angeleyez » Sat Apr 26, 2008 8:14 pm

it's a very nice poem... keep it up :)

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Re: To My Best Friend

Postby Annaa » Sat Jun 14, 2008 9:31 am

Nice poem.. ;-)
If you don`t like me remember it's mind over matter..I don't mind and you don't matter..


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