Show me what love is

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yasnie
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Show me what love is

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"NICEST POST OF THE MONTH"


Show me what love is


Describing love by words
:cry: Showing love by touch
Love between two kinds of humans
With words that was never said by wood
To the fire who made it ash
And with words was never said by cloud
To the rain who made it disappear
Love falls into someone's heart
No request, no ask...
Just don't blame on love
Believe it will guide you to find the peace
Even the dark hold you strength
But the power of love still covering you tight
Day by day love has increasing our spirit
Fighting the opposite of our nature
Love has changed it all to his desire
Love will be evergreen
If you let it flow in your heart
Everybody in the world, I always try to make a friendship...I'm Yasnie please replay me
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Post by arbona »

I enjoyed your poem very much. I especially liked the lines regarding the words that wood has never said to the fire that turns it to ash nor cloud has said to the rain that makes it disappear. Thank you for your poems.
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Post by tikay »

super sweet! :D
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Re: Show me what love is

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yasnie wrote:Describing love by words
:cry: Showing love by touch
Love between two kinds of humans
With words that was never said by wood
To the fire who made it ash
And with words was never said by cloud
To the rain who made it disappear
Love falls into someone's heart
No request, no ask...
Just don't blame on love
Believe it will guide you to find the peace
Even the dark hold you strength
But the power of love still covering you tight
Day by day love has increasing our spirit
Fighting the opposite of our nature
Love has changed it all to his desire
Love will be evergreen
If you let it flow in your heart
Very sweet!!!!!!! Very cool!!!!
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Post by mikaella »

nice poem :D
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Post by sonyym »

Beautiful
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Post by InLove »

Love falls into someone's heart
No request, no ask...
Just don't blame on love
Great! very emotional! :)
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Post by Oriani »

Wow! It was written 3 years ago!
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Post by Admiral »

wow
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