My Little Prayer

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trannie_nguyen
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My Little Prayer

Postby trannie_nguyen » Thu Mar 11, 2004 7:13 am

My Little Prayer
Dear God,
Please keep the people alive,
As you send them to be on this earth.
Please protect your people from death
And let them know that you care for them to survive.

They kill each other by guns.
They think of any kind of guns.
Don’t make us worry any more about dangers.
That people are afraid and become strangers.

About killing students like in
Columbine High School.
We can’t stand that, for we feel like a fool.
We have to face with violence in the future.

Also give us the help of our Constitution,
The law of rights as the 2nd Amendment
That we can use anything to protect ourselves
At every moment
That keeps us from harms, danger and protection.

Now, please, please, and please
With your highness, your carefully
Please bring for us the good face for future.
Even, now and forever.
To love and be loved is the greatest joy on earth.
Love decreases when it ceases to increase

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Postby Desislava » Fri Apr 02, 2004 7:49 pm

That's an interesting idea. But I don't agree with the part that God should protect people from death. I think that Death is only natural. You can't pass through it. Life is like a fire - starts from a little sparkle, burns in flames (sometimes it becomes even a conflagration)...and then suddenly it stops burning. Things follow one another. And that's the way it is :)


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