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goodbye
Posted: Tue Mar 16, 2004 12:07 am
by shortcake
AS I LOOK AT YOUR FACE
I CAN NOT SEE A TRACE
OF SOUL
IN CONTROL
YOUR EYES CONTINUALLY RACE
WITH THE COLDNESS SO CLEAR
ALTHOUGH YOU ARE NEAR
I KNOW
WHEN YOU GO
I WILL TASTE EVERY TEAR
AND I LONG TO BELIEVE
THAT YOU WILL LEARN NOT TO GREIVE
BUT I CRY
WITH GOODBYE
AS YOUR TURNING TO LEAVE
:|
Posted: Tue Sep 14, 2004 8:46 pm
by francine
why are your poems sound so sad?
Posted: Tue Sep 14, 2004 9:07 pm
by pinas
well..just because, i guess
Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2004 6:09 pm
by charlotte
that's sad...
but this is reality....
Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2004 6:10 pm
by pinas
i feel like crying now...
Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2004 6:12 pm
by charlotte
pinas wrote:i feel like crying now...
oh come on... don't feel that way. people come and go. just think of the better days. just cherish every moment you've shared with him. at least you felt loved that time.
Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2004 6:19 pm
by pinas
hey, i was joking...
Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2004 6:26 pm
by Lilian
interesting poem.
nice attempt to write a sad poem......
Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2004 7:42 pm
by charlotte
pinas wrote:hey, i was joking...
...uhmmm, okay
Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2004 7:44 pm
by pooh_bear
that was a nice poem but sad..
Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2004 8:03 pm
by pinas
no i wasn't joking..i have to be honest
Posted: Thu Oct 07, 2004 2:41 pm
by hope4422
i hate the word Tears but
but i always cry