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Romantic Couple

Postby Armen » Fri Jun 11, 2004 11:15 am

Hi all,

This is my first posting. Please let me know if I use incorrect structure or term. Thanks.

ROMANTIC COUPLE

There was a romantic couple who work for different companies.
Everyday, during working hours, the Wife always sends a short message to her husband's mobile phone, just to show how much she care about him.

The messages were usually not long, but sweet, like 'Hi Darling, have you had your lunch ?' or 'Hi Sweetheart, have you fit your tie ?'.
When receiving those messages, the Husband always replies also with sweet SMS.

One day, as usual, the Wife sent an SMS to her Husband. She typed the following message : 'Hi Honey, have you combed your hair ?'
Instead of replying the SMS, the Husband directly called his Wife and said : 'WHO THAT YOU'RE CALLING HONEY ?! I GOT NO HAIR, DON'T YOU REMEMBER ?!'

(Oops ... the Wife has a secret relationship ... ?)

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Postby hope4422 » Mon Sep 27, 2004 7:14 am

l like it
the men should be careful nowdays
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Re: Romantic Couple

Postby pinas » Mon Sep 27, 2004 3:19 pm

Armen wrote:Hi all,

This is my first posting. Please let me know if I use incorrect structure or term. Thanks.

ROMANTIC COUPLE

There was a romantic couple who work for different companies.
Everyday, during working hours, the Wife always sends a short message to her husband's mobile phone, just to show how much she care about him.

The messages were usually not long, but sweet, like 'Hi Darling, have you had your lunch ?' or 'Hi Sweetheart, have you fit your tie ?'.
When receiving those messages, the Husband always replies also with sweet SMS.

One day, as usual, the Wife sent an SMS to her Husband. She typed the following message : 'Hi Honey, have you combed your hair ?'
Instead of replying the SMS, the Husband directly called his Wife and said : 'WHO THAT YOU'RE CALLING HONEY ?! I GOT NO HAIR, DON'T YOU REMEMBER ?!'

(Oops ... the Wife has a secret relationship ... ?)


it's good...but shouldn't it be in the jokes forum?
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Postby Dixie » Mon Sep 27, 2004 3:52 pm

Well she didn't specify what hair... :roll:

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Postby pinas » Mon Sep 27, 2004 3:53 pm

Dixie wrote:Well she didn't specify what hair... :roll:


omg
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Postby Dixie » Mon Sep 27, 2004 3:55 pm

Image

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Postby pinas » Mon Sep 27, 2004 3:58 pm

Dixie wrote:Image


gross
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Postby Dixie » Mon Sep 27, 2004 4:03 pm

What were u thinking about, naughty girl? :D

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Postby pinas » Mon Sep 27, 2004 4:06 pm

Dixie wrote:What were u thinking about, naughty girl? :D


ummm...legs???
hehe...
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Postby Dixie » Mon Sep 27, 2004 4:08 pm

Yeah, legs, that's right :D

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Postby pinas » Mon Sep 27, 2004 4:11 pm

Dixie wrote:Yeah, legs, that's right :D


yeah..i knew it!!!hehe
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Postby RedRose » Thu Oct 07, 2004 3:31 pm

Dixie wrote:Well she didn't specify what hair... :roll:


haha!

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Re: Romantic Couple

Postby RedRose » Thu Oct 07, 2004 3:33 pm

Armen wrote:Hi all,

This is my first posting. Please let me know if I use incorrect structure or term. Thanks.


nice story! I was attracted deeply!


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