Hurt isn't a Feeling.

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Hurt isn't a Feeling.

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:) Hell is not a place
it is merely my life.
i get stuck with little love and a lot of pain
heartache leads to angar and aggression in my eyes
hurt isn't a feeling but a place im stuck in
razor blades and three inches pills are just the same.
I think i'll take them and maybe we will play a game
i'll take a pill and pop it in while the blade kisses my skin
the pills will drown out the pain as the razor leaves.
the pills begin to kick in and lipstick stains are left upon my skin.
:wink: Ri Won Mu
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Lee wrote::) Hell is not a place
it is merely my life.
i get stuck with little love and a lot of pain
heartache leads to angar and aggression in my eyes
hurt isn't a feeling but a place im stuck in
razor blades and three inches pills are just the same.
I think i'll take them and maybe we will play a game
i'll take a pill and pop it in while the blade kisses my skin
the pills will drown out the pain as the razor leaves.
the pills begin to kick in and lipstick stains are left upon my skin.
:wink: Ri Won Mu
geee.. im worried. you're not planning to do anything, are you?
:( :( :(
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Hi,
I like this poem Ri. Its very nice. I will show this to your husband too. :D :D :D
I can't change the direction of the wind but I can adjust my sails to my destinations.
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Husband? :D
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Waqar Javed wrote:Hi,
I like this poem Ri. Its very nice. I will show this to your husband too. :D :D :D
I thought Lee was a man! :shock:
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RedRose wrote:
Waqar Javed wrote:Hi,
I like this poem Ri. Its very nice. I will show this to your husband too. :D :D :D
I thought Lee was a man! :shock:
me too. :roll: :shock:
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OH MY GOD
I can't not believe my friends know me as Man... :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:

I can't believe this.....I've never mention that i am a man :cry: :cry: :cry:

Dixie one i believe as my mother....you make me very sad....and now i am crying :cry: :cry: :cry:


And RedRose and Francine too....you two also make me very sad.... :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: And now everybody will see me as a man :cry: :cry: :cry: :arrow: ;)
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... You're not?? Image
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i think he is a boy!!!!!!!!!!!//// how about this ...
don't you guys think so?
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