LOVE IN SILENCE...

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ayie
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LOVE IN SILENCE...

Postby ayie » Mon Sep 13, 2004 2:03 pm

I turned around, looked your way
I saw you standing far away,

I couldn't speak for you wouldn't hear
The words i should've said when you were still here.


Now there's nothing that i could do,
for even i cry out i just wouldn't get through.

I struggled to say the words, but how?
For you will never hear me now.


I kept the sorrow in my heart
For that i thought the pain would part

But then the cut still hurts inside
All the regrets i could not hide.


I looked away up the sky
I knew how swiftly time will fly.

But no matter how i try to breathe the air
inside my heart you are still there


Now i realize what i should do...
Time passes... But in my silence...
I WILL STILL BE LOVING YOU...
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Postby Dixie » Mon Sep 13, 2004 2:15 pm

Wonderful.

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Postby ayie » Mon Sep 13, 2004 2:30 pm

Thanks!! :D You know, that was a poem i wrote when i was 12 years old... I still remember it now.

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Postby francine » Tue Sep 14, 2004 8:19 pm

ayie wrote:Thanks!! :D You know, that was a poem i wrote when i was 12 years old... I still remember it now.


now, aren't you so smart at your age when you wrote this poem?!!? so little, yet so inlove... :D

hmmmmm.... i'll post mine too one of these days...
but i hope it won't turn out to be a funny thing...
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Postby jonrey10 » Tue Sep 14, 2004 8:55 pm

patience makes your love for the person stronger... all the way

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Postby pinas » Tue Sep 14, 2004 9:04 pm

yeah...i know...
too much for being soooo patient...
dalagang pilipina - a cool chick that is


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