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ayie
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by ayie » Mon Sep 13, 2004 2:03 pm
I turned around, looked your way
I saw you standing far away,
I couldn't speak for you wouldn't hear
The words i should've said when you were still here.
Now there's nothing that i could do,
for even i cry out i just wouldn't get through.
I struggled to say the words, but how?
For you will never hear me now.
I kept the sorrow in my heart
For that i thought the pain would part
But then the cut still hurts inside
All the regrets i could not hide.
I looked away up the sky
I knew how swiftly time will fly.
But no matter how i try to breathe the air
inside my heart you are still there
Now i realize what i should do...
Time passes... But in my silence...
I WILL STILL BE LOVING YOU... 
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Dixie
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by Dixie » Mon Sep 13, 2004 2:15 pm
Wonderful.
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ayie
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by ayie » Mon Sep 13, 2004 2:30 pm
Thanks!! :D You know, that was a poem i wrote when i was 12 years old... I still remember it now.
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francine
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by francine » Tue Sep 14, 2004 8:19 pm
ayie wrote:Thanks!! :D You know, that was a poem i wrote when i was 12 years old... I still remember it now.
now, aren't you so smart at your age when you wrote this poem?!!? so little, yet so inlove... :D
hmmmmm.... i'll post mine too one of these days...
but i hope it won't turn out to be a funny thing...

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jonrey10
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by jonrey10 » Tue Sep 14, 2004 8:55 pm
patience makes your love for the person stronger... all the way
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pinas
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by pinas » Tue Sep 14, 2004 9:04 pm
yeah...i know...
too much for being soooo patient...
dalagang pilipina - a cool chick that is