amidst the stormy days

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amidst the stormy days

Post by pooh_bear » Wed Sep 15, 2004 1:20 pm

As I awake amidst the gloom
Your face alone receives the bloom
But sadness prolonged result at naught
Ergo, durst to care and give life a thought.

And so betwixt grief and bliss
I chose not grief for it would mean defeat
Let alone bliss be a vict'ry
To exhilarate us through all eternity.

Oh, am I really awake when I see your face
Amidst the gloom and stormy days
But it matters not if it appears as dream
For only you alone can make it real.

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Re: amidst the stormy days

Post by francine » Wed Sep 15, 2004 2:13 pm

pooh_bear wrote:As I awake amidst the gloom
Your face alone receives the bloom
But sadness prolonged result at naught
Ergo, durst to care and give life a thought.

And so betwixt grief and bliss
I chose not grief for it would mean defeat
Let alone bliss be a vict'ry
To exhilarate us through all eternity.

Oh, am I really awake when I see your face
Amidst the gloom and stormy days
But it matters not if it appears as dream
For only you alone can make it real.
lovely... very lovely indeed..... how wonderful.... :P
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Post by pooh_bear » Wed Sep 15, 2004 2:59 pm

thank you francine..

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Post by francine » Wed Sep 15, 2004 3:46 pm

but you haven't answer our questions yet. like, in what specific part in the Philippines are you at right now.....
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Post by pooh_bear » Wed Sep 15, 2004 6:03 pm

ill tell you later!

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Post by pinas » Wed Sep 15, 2004 6:03 pm

i knew it!!! it's wag po koya!!!
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Post by Lilian » Wed Sep 15, 2004 6:29 pm

wow very nice pooh,,

i liked the 3rd stanza most..

very creative...
English is my second language

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Post by pooh_bear » Wed Sep 15, 2004 7:15 pm

thanks lilian. you're reading my posts. :wink:

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